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« Reply #1 on: June 09, 2010, 10:01:42 am » |
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Plz keep it coming. This should be very interresting to say the least  |
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Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}
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« Reply #2 on: June 09, 2010, 11:54:21 am » |
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interesting. i would like to see how this plays out. keep going.
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« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2010, 01:15:00 pm » |
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 I am surpriced, because those comments weren't...welll.....expected. But Zero hasn't been here yet, because if he hates Dreamwalkers Dilemma, he will definetly hate my writing, which is far worse in my opinion. I am doing this in secrecy... Chapter 2 wll come tomorrow, because I've got some nice 1-1,5 hour to do it.
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« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2010, 03:36:51 pm » |
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why are you comparing my work with yours? yours is a bit better then mine...i think.
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« Reply #5 on: June 09, 2010, 03:44:06 pm » |
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Looks interesting to me so far. Reminds me of one of the other fanfics as far as plot goes so far, but it's probably a coincidence (what's it called - that one by Tawtewng before his current one) - I've read quite a few fanfictions on this site and there's a limit to the number of ways you CAN start one of these off.
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« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2010, 03:57:32 pm » |
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Looks interesting to me so far. Reminds me of one of the other fanfics as far as plot goes so far, but it's probably a coincidence (what's it called - that one by Tawtewng before his current one) - I've read quite a few fanfictions on this site and there's a limit to the number of ways you CAN start one of these off.
Yeah agree, all the good ideas are taken, so why not start my own with not a child of two species, but Na'vi only. And leave him completely without knowlegde. Chapter 2 has in fact formed itself within my head now, so expect it by 13:00 (GMT+1) tomorrow. |
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« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2010, 04:00:08 pm » |
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why are you comparing my work with yours? yours is a bit better then mine...i think.
I thought mine was worse than yours technically, and since ZERO hated on yours, i kinda expect the same reaction. |
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« Reply #8 on: June 09, 2010, 06:17:38 pm » |
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why are you comparing my work with yours? yours is a bit better then mine...i think.
I thought mine was worse than yours technically, and since ZERO hated on yours, i kinda expect the same reaction. zero hates the style of writing.. and the useless censoring (who uses @$$? really) but this is not about duma's story this is about yours and I can haz more? (And i don't care if you nabbed ideas from mine... looking back mine was a bit rushed i think... people can use the rough idea if they want..) |
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« Reply #9 on: June 10, 2010, 02:17:17 am » |
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^I did some modifications on the idea, you see, one species, not two. I am sorry, but I wont be finished before 1300 (GMT+1)... I got to give back the school PC i have borrowed and can't write untill I come home. Then i have 1500-1900 alone-time to write maybe 2 (or possibly 3)chapters. Eywa ayngahu, ma ayeylan! EDIT: Irayo, ma history karyu ended the lesson an hour too early today, chapter comming up shorty:) EDIT2: Chapter 2 up |
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« Reply #10 on: June 10, 2010, 08:26:07 am » |
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want 3 wonder how he will react to pandora
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« Reply #11 on: June 10, 2010, 08:53:02 am » |
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want 3 wonder how he will react to pandora
Wait no more. Posting it right now. edit: It's posted, I hope you'll like it. I promise to write longer chapters from now on. *starts writing number 4...* Remember, I have always sucked at making up names in stories. |
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« Reply #12 on: June 10, 2010, 09:02:37 am » |
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4 would be nice, as well as longer chapters...unless you intend on doing a s***load of shorts
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« Reply #13 on: June 10, 2010, 09:12:01 am » |
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4 would be nice, as well as longer chapters...unless you intend on doing a s***load of shorts
The 4th one will be longer, i promise. I am writing it right now. There's no more homework, even though school ends next week. Damn, you guys are a bit demanding, even though I enjoy writing these chapters, I will stop for today after 4 (i think, or maybe...) EDIT: Chapter 4 finished EDIT2: Chapter 5 is up...now i am seriously stopping for today. Could take a while now for the next chapter, at home where I am in weekends, I have a problem with brothers suddenly boosting into my room. I shall try at least. If you don't understand the Na'vi part, then you know how Jay (main character) feels. |
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« Reply #14 on: June 10, 2010, 02:32:47 pm » |
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i know how addicting it is to write this stuff. i couldnt stop till CH. 10 the first time I started, and if you read it you realize how damn long my CH. are.
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