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http://forum.learnnavi.org/fiction-fanfiction/the-story-of-theyl-comments-thread/Book: The story of Theyl.
The book will be written out of the sight of Theyl, so the I person who’s speaking is Theyl.
Phrases spoken by other character then Theyl will be prefixed by ‘-‘
Introduction of the characters:
-Theyl: An agile teenage Na’vi boy who’s about to experience a lot of things!
Tirea: A young and smart Na’vi guy who know’s the answer for everything, everywhere!
Jameson: A 34 year-old human researcher who is stationed at the Blue Lagoon camp.
Thomas: A 20 year-old guy, just arrived at Pandora, quickly irritated and angry.
Jimmy and Jester: Two personal guards of Theyl. Jimmy is a Sampson pilot and Jester fires the gun.
Sey’ili: Theyl’s younger sister, always thinks to know better.
Ke’eko: A younger, and very shy friend of Theyl, has an eye for Sey’ili.
The rest of the cast exists of RDA soldiers, researchers, and smart-asses, also Na’vi warriors, people and friends of Theyl and Tirea.
Hapxì ‘aw: werem.
“C’mon then, numnuts! Catch the ball then!”
-“Oh you think I can’t, huh?” Tirea said
“I indeed think you can’t, catch it if you can, catch it if you can!”
-“Oh, come on, Theyl, you think I never balled before?
It doesn’t mean that if I’m against humans taking our world, I don’t like their sports!”
“Oh I’m gunna tell that to your friends.”
-“what? Uh, no you’re not”
Tirea quickly crossed me and grabbed the basketball which I was holding in my tail.
“Hey, what the?! You’ve been practicing, huh?”
-“Theyl, I really thought you knew me better then this.”
I tried to chase him while he was running to the goal but wasn’t fast enough to prevent him to score.
“One – Zero for the anti-humans!”
-“Oh just shut up Theyl you know I’m not that much against humans.
But they’re just destroying our forests!”
“Ah well what can we do against it? We’ll just have to live with it.”
-“No, we shou…”
-“Ikran attack! ! !” One of the tower guards shouted.
-“Get down but do not fire!” Tirea shouted,”I repeat, do not fire!”
-“What? It’s, it’s gunna eat us!?” One of the gate guards responded/
-“No get down or hide, but do not fire!” He repeated.
The Ikran slowly flew over the camp, looking around.
-“S… Screw this, I’m killing it before it eats us all!”
-“Nooo!” Tirea stood up and started running towards the guard.
But it was already too lated, 17 rounds being emptied from the guards rifle and into the Ikran’s body.
It crashed to the ground, taking plants and small animals with it.
-“You bloody idiot!” Tirea yelled. “Do you know what you’ve just done?”
-“What, I should just have let it kill me?” The guard said.
-“It was in no way going to eat you! It was just scouting some land!”
-“Like you could tell that just by looking at it!”
-“There’s something called ‘animal behaviour’!
They behave in different ways when they do certain things!
And in this case it was in no way about to attack!”
-“I’ve had enough of this f***ing smartass.”
The guard took his sideweapon and shot Tirea in his shoulder before I could even make a move.
“Tirea! Noo!” I yelled.
The other guards started running to the one guard that shot Tirea,
and took his weapon, they cuffed him and escorted him to a helicopter.
End of hapxì ‘aw: werem
Na'vi translation following in 2-4 days, depends. Creating comments thread now.
