My own sci-fi movie/novel, The Great Battle Of The Universe

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

Kaltxi, my friends all around the world
oel ngati kameie


Hi, it is me Tsanten Eywa(my real name is Kristoffer, call me Chris)
I have some very big I want to share with you all

I am currently now working on a film-script that I am creating by myself
It will be a sci-fi movie
And I hope, and I really want this script to succeed, and if anyone is interested in it, and it can be a great movie
I want this to be out on the big screen

The first time I started to think about this story, was around in late 2008- or beginning of 2009
I started to create this story, in my mind. I don't really know how long time I have had this idea
It might have been there for a very long time



Plot(not finished, have a lot more):
The story will start in the outer space, some deep in the Milky Way, a couple of hundred light years from us
I can say that it is one person who will be sent from a planet, some hundred light years away, and be sent to Earth, to give them a message, a reason why he were sent to Earth
he were sent to Earth, because to tell the humans that they need to join a federation. A federation about different civilizations in the Milky Way need to cooperate to make peace in the universe
And the humans, on Earth, is the only civilization in the Milky Way that hasn't joined this federation

And more and more. I have a lot of work in front of me


So.... I wanna know what you all think about this

I have also made a facebook page for this also:
http://www.facebook.com/UnknownSciFiMovieTitle




Over and out
Regards
Tsanten Eywa 'eveng
Eywa ngahu

[Clarke]

Show us the work, even if only a bit of it. Summaries aren't helpful; they make Pochantas, Dances with Wolves and Avatar look like the same movie.

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

Show us the work. Summaries aren't helpful; they make Pochantas, Dances with Wolves and Avatar look like the same movie.

I am just writing the script now
If it goes well, I will send this to maybe Paramount and/or 20th Century Fox
I have not created some small videos yet
I just started writing today

[Clarke]

Even if you're sitting on the next Titanic, it's fairly unlikely that either of them will be interested. I don't say this to dishearten you - they have a lot of writers working for them, and have a pretty good idea of how good those writers are at making profitable films, so they don't really have the time or inclination to read submissions from other people.

However, you should keep writing anyway. You can't do anything with a script that isn't finished. 

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

Even if you're sitting on the next Titanic, it's fairly unlikely that either of them will be interested. I don't say this to dishearten you - they have a lot of writers working for them, and have a pretty good idea of how good those writers are at making profitable films, so they don't really have the time or inclination to read submissions from other people.

However, you should keep writing anyway. You can't do anything with a script that isn't finished. 

ok, thanks for it
I am going to write more, this is something I will not stop in
I really want it finished


What you think about the plot?

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

I started yesterday with the film-script and now I have written 5 pages
The characters biography am I also working on

It is now 8 protagonists


These 5 pages will possibly take 5-10 minutes of the movie

[DJ Makto]

When you say you want the film to be on the big screen, I'll assume that you are looking to make this into a feature length film. You definitely want you script to be nice and detailed. Still, I'll echo Clarke's point. Major film studios are bombarded with thousands of scripts--and ultimately only pick the ones that have the most commercial appeal.

If you are really serious about getting this film out there, you might have to commit to the indie route (like Iron Sky), or try producing a scaled down 5-10 minute short to showcase your vision and concept. 

Keep it up and best of luck in getting it out there. 

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

When you say you want the film to be on the big screen, I'll assume that you are looking to make this into a feature length film. You definitely want you script to be nice and detailed. Still, I'll echo Clarke's point. Major film studios are bombarded with thousands of scripts--and ultimately only pick the ones that have the most commercial appeal.

If you are really serious about getting this film out there, you might have to commit to the indie route (like Iron Sky), or try producing a scaled down 5-10 minute short to showcase your vision and concept.  

Keep it up and best of luck in getting it out there.  

I know that, I have read about it
It isn't nothing to be dissapointed of, if your script will not be chosen

[Emtokay]

Speaking of Film scripts and stuff, I usually write songs that way, come up with a concept/story, quick bio of characters and write down the script etc. Then read over it and change it around to suit song lyrics

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

Speaking of Film scripts and stuff, I usually write songs that way, come up with a concept/story, quick bio of characters and write down the script etc. Then read over it and change it around to suit song lyrics

songs is not my biggest interest, but maybe I can also write a book about this story?
But, I really want it to be made as a movie

If I get this finished, I will send this to different film studios, like Paramount or 20th Century Fox
What my mission is, to get finished this script by the end of this decade, to 2020, so that's 8 years to write it
I have plenty of time

[Txantslusam Skxawng]

For starters, you could send it to Sundance Film Festival, if you finished your movie, but that has an entry fee....


And to be honest about the script, I feel like its been done before, in movies, evil civilization taking over universe, kinda reminds me of the latest Star Trek movie. That's just my opinion, but I'm no film-expert, but then again, this is just a short synopsis.

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

I have finished 14 pages of the script now
starting on page 15
this script, I writing lines to the characters in the story

I look forward to this to be completed
still a long way to go

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

I have updated the Plot Synopsis, it will possible be more updated, just keep yourself updated.

Plot to the 1st movie:

***UPDATED 20.10.12***

The story takes first place in the year 2036, in a fictional solar system far away from Earth. On a habitable moon called Janus, 1046 light years from Earth in the constellation Sagittarius.

The main-person in the story, is named Chris. He is known as the Vice leader/Commander of Milky Way, and his own father is The Great leader of Milky Way. He died in a horrifying battle against an evil civilization from the Andromeda Galaxy. They shot down his spaceship. He then awakens on Earth, sent by his own Goddess of the planet Janus.

His soul were sent to Earth by her, and then he were born on Earth. He were sent to Earth, to tell the humans about the danger that is out there. The humans need to join a federation, an Outer Galactic Federation(OGF). A federation about different civilizations in the Milky Way and other places in The Universe need to cooperate to make peace and tranquility in the universe. This federation did Commander Chris started, and this are what all civilizations are fighting for. It is only one civilization who doesn't follow this, and are the only threatening civilization in The Universe, and that is they from the Andromeda Galaxy.

And the humans, on Earth, is the only civilization in the Milky Way that hasn't joined this federation.

In 2040, Chris is being born on Earth. 14th of august, tuesday. He first don't know where he is. He starting asking questions of where he is, but then he realize where he is. He realizes that he is on Earth, why he is there. He is born as a human, but that doesn't take away his memory about where he is really coming from. Later in is childhood on Earth, when he grows older, his Earth-parents notice that he isn't like everyone else on Earth. He can't speak the language in the country he lives in. He only speak english and his own language, known as Janusian. Then FBI get known about this, and starting investigating it. They ask him a lot of questions of where he is from, who he are, and why he is on Earth. Later NASA get also known about this, and they and FBI need to hide the info about his identity.

In 2040s on Earth there is living over 120 million people in New York City.
Population of Earth; 9.8 billion
A lot of people in New York City are living in giant skyscrapers, each fitting over 40,000 residents.
In Japan: Deserted!!! In 2027 Japan was evaquated, wide spread diseases, and the whole Island Japan was set into quarantine
In China: Population; 2.2 billions. The whole country is like a concrete jungle. The great rainforests in China has been destroyed to build super-cities. Which means outstanding large citites.

In 2054, Chris travels to Washington DC with an FBI agent to speak with the President of the United States. There he says to him that we need to prepare for a war. Chris and his civilization from Janus, will give Earth some kind of a defense system against the evil civilization from Andromeda Galaxy, and also the President need to sign under some kind of a contract. First they need to set up a meeting, all leaders in the Outer-Galactic Federation, coming to Earth and other big leaders in the Milky Way and some areas around Milky Way and other places in The Universe.
The metting happens in the year 2058.

In the Andromeda Galaxy lies a very evil civilization that are planning to take over Milky Way and the entire universe. This will be the biggest war no civilization in the entire universe have seen before. They need to do something, to prevent this armageddon.
An another universe also exist, some of them coming to help and take down the evil people from the galaxy M31.
There is existing 7 universes. That is the Andromeda Galaxy civilization's plan to take over these universes. If they taking down the defense system, known as the Universal Federation(or Outer-Galactic Federation;OGF). They kan rule over an entire universe, then they can travel to an another universe and fight and destroy everything there.


It's just a question, of who will win this battle. If the M31 people takes over. It's the end for all civilizations in this Universe we are living in.
And this is what is called, the battle of The Universe.



Also, I have 5 unannounced titles for the movie, so it's up for me to choose. This are titles that I have chosen:

• Fate of the Universe
• The Great Destiny
• Universal War
• The Great Battle of the Universe
• Andromeda Combat

['Onatxan te Skxawng Tìrey'itan]

I have some food for thoughts.
first off, if you're looking for an opinion on the title, i like Andromeda Combat.

Also, make sure you know exactly where this is going. I have tried writing stories before after coming up with an idea, but it never got anywhere cuz i didn't plan out the plot. So make sure you plan out all the twists and villains and stuff.

In 2014, Chris is being born on Earth. 18th of august, monday. He first don't know where he is. He starting asking questions of where he is, but then he realize where he is. He realizes that he is on Earth, why he is there.

So Chris was born on earth, but his parents are from Janus, and he figures out his heritage and why he's on Earth? Bit confused here

Incidentally, is Janus a real moon, or did you make it up?

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

I have some food for thoughts.
first off, if you're looking for an opinion on the title, i like Andromeda Combat.

Also, make sure you know exactly where this is going. I have tried writing stories before after coming up with an idea, but it never got anywhere cuz i didn't plan out the plot. So make sure you plan out all the twists and villains and stuff.

In 2014, Chris is being born on Earth. 18th of august, monday. He first don't know where he is. He starting asking questions of where he is, but then he realize where he is. He realizes that he is on Earth, why he is there.

So Chris was born on earth, but his parents are from Janus, and he figures out his heritage and why he's on Earth? Bit confused here

Incidentally, is Janus a real moon, or did you make it up?

He died in a combat, his soul were sent to Earth, the God on Earth took care of him, sent him down to Earth
This is science fiction, not reality
Just you imagine this

Janus is based on a small moon to Saturn, it is possible that I will change names
When I'm finished with the filmscript, I will read through the whole of it, and see if it need some changes

['Onatxan te Skxawng Tìrey'itan]

He died in a combat, his soul were sent to Earth, the God on Earth took care of him, sent him down to Earth

interesting. quite interesting

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

TITLE CHOOSED!

I've finally picked the title for the movie, and it will be:

The Great Battle Of The Universe



I am now thinking about to write a sequel of the story,
the beginning of everything, where everything really started.


I really want to send the first script to Paramount Studios, just waiting back for an email from them, for how I can send the script to them
I need their email, and I can't find it

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

OK, so now I am gonna create a prequel to this story. It will be a 2-part story.
It was first set in a weird direction, but the second movie will be about the past, the very beginning of everything. You will be taken in a journey
through space, to different civilizations, to the Sagittarius constellation, where the second story will take part(the same with the first story, but the beginning of it was in the past). That story will show the very first beginning of Commander Chris's life

I will start soon writing it



Hope you all have it well
- Tsanten Eywa 'eveng

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

2 different universes exist in the story. The one we are living in and an another one. They who live in the other universe, are some way like humanoids, they are very intelligent, and they can get over to our universe. All civlizations can do it, even in our universe, but there is one condition. It depends on how advanced and intelligent a civilization is. A civilization need to reach kind of a level to develop this kind of a device, or machine to do it. Also this machine can be installed in any kind of spaceships


These are some things, that will be a part of the story

[Tsanten Eywa 'eveng]

Future plans to travel around the world to start filming and take photographs of different places. Different nature on Earth will resemble different alien worlds

For the creation of the movie, I will use the friend nature to capture and take photographs and after that edit, add effects etc... to the photographs and videos I am taking


These are locations I am going to visit

• China(summer 2014)
• Washington DC
• Dubai(autumn 2014?)
• Iceland
• Hawaii
• Norway(I'm living here)
• Indonesia

Do anybody know about some stunning, breathtaking volcanoes?