Wind12's entry

[Wind12]

It def. wasn't the most advanced but here is was

I can't write good enough yet to really convey how amazing the Avatar experience has been for me in Na'vi, so I made this prose about some positives of the Na'vi people.

Na'vi lu fkew,
Na'vi lu seykxel,
Na'vi lu lefpomtokx,
Reyfya Na'viä lu leioae,
Reyfya Na'viä lu tstunwi,
Reyfya Na'viä lu 'okrol,
Reyfya Na'viä lu pxasul,
Reyfya Na'viä ke lu tìkawng,
Reyfya Na'viä lu meuianga',
Reyfya Na'viä ke lu ngong,
Reyfya Na'viäl fmal rey'engit,
Reyfya Na'viäl oeti eykefu lefpom,
Oeru sunu Reyfya Na'viä!

[Plumps]

Remember, ma tsmuk, elaborate and excessive style is not always a guarantee for emotional pull. Sometimes the simplest things can make you choke up

I actually quite liked the repetition of your work

[Tìtstewan]

Ma Wind12,

I'm still proud of you that you've participated at the contest! Tsaw loleiu txantsan ulte oe seiyi irayo ngar nìtxan!

[Vawmataw]

Kaltxì ma Wind12! Your text is great. You participated and you expressed yourself, so be proud and happy!

As a beginner in the Na'vi language, you made a gramatically very good text.

Spoiler: Notes and mistakes (open only if you want to figure out)

1. Reyfya Na'viä lu leioae. - I was not there when you wrote it, but leioae is a noun meaning respect. So, ''the Na'vi culture is respect'' seems incorrect, unless you really mean it.
You can say: Reyfyaru Na'viä lu leioae. (The Na'vi culture has respect)
2. Reyfya Na'viä lu pxasul. - Pxasul is for food, but I don't know how to replace it.
3. Reyfya Na'viä lu 'okrol - What do you mean exactly?
3. Reyfya Na'viäl should be Reyfyal Na'viä - The core of the subject group is reyfya and you can't have two ending cases in the same word.

Of course, don't edit your entry. This spoiler is just for your information.

[Wind12]

Furia ayngeyä tìtstunwi, Oe irayo si 

[Wind12]

Kaltxì ma Wind12! Your text is great. You participated and you expressed yourself, so be proud and happy!

As a beginner in the Na'vi language, you made a gramatically very good text.

Spoiler: Notes and mistakes (open only if you want to figure out)

1. Reyfya Na'viä lu leioae. - I was not there when you wrote it, but leioae is a noun meaning respect. So, ''the Na'vi culture is respect'' seems incorrect, unless you really mean it.
You can say: Reyfyaru Na'viä lu leioae. (The Na'vi culture has respect)
2. Reyfya Na'viä lu pxasul. - Pxasul is for food, but I don't know how to replace it.
3. Reyfya Na'viä lu 'okrol - What do you mean exactly?
3. Reyfya Na'viäl should be Reyfyal Na'viä - The core of the subject group is reyfya and you can't have two ending cases in the same word.

Of course, don't edit your entry. This spoiler is just for your information.

Irayo nìtxan, with "'okrol" I was trying to say that I think it is neat that the Na'vi's culture is "ancient"

As for the food one, now that I see that it seems silly, but I was trying to get across that the culture was "fresh" as in something new and different.
Ngeyä srungri, Oe Irayo si.