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Offline Wind12

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Wind12's entry
« on: January 03, 2015, 06:15:46 pm »
It def. wasn't the most advanced but here is was :)

I can't write good enough yet to really convey how amazing the Avatar experience has been for me in Na'vi, so I made this prose about some positives of the Na'vi people. :)

Na'vi lu fkew,
Na'vi lu seykxel,
Na'vi lu lefpomtokx,
Reyfya Na'viä lu leioae,
Reyfya Na'viä lu tstunwi,
Reyfya Na'viä lu 'okrol,
Reyfya Na'viä lu pxasul,
Reyfya Na'viä ke lu tìkawng,
Reyfya Na'viä lu meuianga',
Reyfya Na'viä ke lu ngong,
Reyfya Na'viäl fmal rey'engit,
Reyfya Na'viäl oeti eykefu lefpom,
Oeru sunu Reyfya Na'viä!

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Re: Wind12's entry
« Reply #1 on: January 03, 2015, 07:00:58 pm »
Remember, ma tsmuk, elaborate and excessive style is not always a guarantee for emotional pull. Sometimes the simplest things can make you choke up ;)

I actually quite liked the repetition of your work ;)

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Re: Wind12's entry
« Reply #2 on: January 03, 2015, 07:08:28 pm »
Ma Wind12,

I'm still proud of you that you've participated at the contest! Tsaw loleiu txantsan ulte oe seiyi irayo ngar nìtxan!
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Re: Wind12's entry
« Reply #3 on: January 03, 2015, 07:17:58 pm »
Kaltxì ma Wind12! Your text is great. :) You participated and you expressed yourself, so be proud and happy!

As a beginner in the Na'vi language, you made a gramatically very good text.
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Re: Wind12's entry
« Reply #4 on: January 03, 2015, 08:51:06 pm »
Furia ayngeyä tìtstunwi, Oe irayo si  :) :) :)

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Re: Wind12's entry
« Reply #5 on: January 21, 2015, 11:42:21 pm »
Kaltxì ma Wind12! Your text is great. :) You participated and you expressed yourself, so be proud and happy!

As a beginner in the Na'vi language, you made a gramatically very good text.

Irayo nìtxan, with "'okrol" I was trying to say that I think it is neat that the Na'vi's culture is "ancient" :)

As for the food one, now that I see that it seems silly, but I was trying to get across that the culture was "fresh" as in something new and different.
Ngeyä srungri, Oe Irayo si. :) :)

 

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