Archaic's fanfic dialogue help thread

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Toliman

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Quote from: archaic on December 16, 2019, 03:17:03 PM
So, after an unintended hiatus, I'm hoping to pick up where this left off.
I would be most grateful for you guy's help with the following .....
And I will try again :)


Quote"He thinks it is poison."
Po fpìl futa tsaw lu txum.

Quote"They do not come inside often. It is very rare."
Pxìm fo ke tsun ziva'u nemfa mìfa. Tsaw lu kelpxìmrun nìtxan.

Quote"They want to know what it is, that smells so strange."
Fol new ivomum tsa'uti, pumru lu heka fahew.
(literaly: He want know it, it has strange smell)

archaic

Thank you for these, there will be more, hopefully fairly soon.
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Toliman

Kea tìkin :) Great that you work on your fanfic again.

archaic

It's painfully slow, and preparations for the holidays take time, but it's certainly not dead!
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Yeah, I understand. But good that its not dead :)

archaic

At the rate it is progressing, I may have to ask Cameron to delay Avatar 2 again.


;)  ;D
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HRH ;D ;D

I hope that your work will progress well and delay will be not needed ;D :)

archaic

Wow, this has been badly delayed, but I need to beg some help with another .....


"They have gone, that's good." (specifically, they have just departed)
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Quote from: archaic on January 06, 2020, 04:50:11 PM
Wow, this has been badly delayed, but I need to beg some help with another .....
It's ok, I hope that you find more time for it :)

Quote"They have gone, that's good." (specifically, they have just departed)
Fo hìmum, tsaw lu sìltsan.

archaic

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archaic

Do the Na'vi have breakfast? (I have always assumed they did) If so, do we know how they would refer to it? Wutso rewon?
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Quote from: archaic on January 07, 2020, 05:12:41 PM
Do the Na'vi have breakfast? (I have always assumed they did) If so, do we know how they would refer to it? Wutso rewon?
Hmm, I think that word "breakfast" we don't have so I would say it as Wutso rewonä.

archaic

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Toliman

Kea tìkin nìmun :)
I hope that it will be helpfull for your fanfic writing.

archaic

A few more .....

"It is time to take him back."
"I am begging you."
"We must go."
"Do not do that."
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Quote"It is time to take him back."
Set ayoeng zene kämivunge poti ne'ìm.

Quote"I am begging you."
Oel fngo' ngati.

Quote"We must go."
Ayoe zene kivä. (we all except you)
Ayoeng zene kivä. (we all with you)

Quote"Do not do that."
Tsa'uri nga kem ke sivi!

archaic

After another delay and I back in the saddle again, which is good, I even managed to figure out a couple of sentences myself, but I have another three I would greatly appreciate help with .....


"Aynga kä nìtxan, kìyerä."
"Fikewongtu fngä tikin."

This one I managed part of .....
"Oel ngatì teach you to plltxe nìna'vi."


All help is, as always, very much appreciated.

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Quote from: archaic on February 14, 2020, 05:12:44 PM
"Aynga kä nìtxan, kìyerä."
"Fikewongtu fngä tikin."
What you wanted say here exactly?

Quote from: archaic on February 14, 2020, 05:12:44 PM
This one I managed part of .....
"Oel ngatì teach you to plltxe nìna'vi."
I would say:
Oel kar ngati fya'oru fyape plltxe nì'Na'vi.

Quote from: archaic on February 14, 2020, 05:12:44 PM
All help is, as always, very much appreciated.
:D  :D
Nìprrte' :D

archaic

Quote from: Toliman on February 14, 2020, 05:38:17 PM
Quote from: archaic on February 14, 2020, 05:12:44 PM
"Aynga kä nìtxan, kìyerä."
"Fikewongtu fngä tikin."
What you wanted say here exactly?

First one .....
"Aynga kä nìtxan, kìyerä." All of you go very far away, go in the near future and don't come back.

Second one should have been "Fiketuwong fngä tikin." This sky person needs the rest room [urgently].

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