Is this right

[Palulukan makto 'aw]

Kaltxì!!
Was wondering is this correct
Oe kin ikran slu taronyu
irayo

[Hawnuyu atxen]

Kaltxì!

I think you either should use <iv> on "slu", or add "fpi" before it.
(i'm not sure if either is correct though, but i htink they are)

[omängum fra'uti]

You are missing case endings and something to join clauses.  Correct would be...
Oe-l ikran-it kin fte sl<iv>u taronyu.
The iv is required after fte there.

[Palulukan makto 'aw]

irayo
just started yesterday this is so confuing

[omängum fra'uti]

The most important thing to keep in mind is that word order is free.  So while in English we know what the subject and object are by which is before and after the verb, Na'vi carries no such limit.  Therefore you need to say how the noun is participating with suffixes.  Typically if you have more than one verb you need something to join them.  (Fpi would not have worked because it is just an adposition, so it works on a noun, not a second clause.)

[Ftiafpi]

If you're having trouble check out the Na'vi in a Nutshell guide, it's great.

http://forum.learnnavi.org/your-projects-other-resources/navi-in-a-nutshell-4845/

[Tsamsiyu92]

^I would recommend the worksheets after you read through some info in that guide. you'll find the worksheets under the documents thread