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Mark 5
« on: September 19, 2014, 09:57:11 am »
Hello everybody,

For a blog entry I translated Mark 5,1-20 and I found the "Bible leNa'vi Project" on the Internet. Where can I get an account for http://wiki.learnnavi.org/Bible to put my translation in there?

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Re: Mark 5
« Reply #1 on: September 19, 2014, 10:17:53 am »
Could we see your translation?

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Re: Mark 5
« Reply #2 on: September 19, 2014, 10:29:44 am »
Srane, we would love to see translations here before they get posted to the Wiki. :)

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Re: Mark 5
« Reply #3 on: September 19, 2014, 10:55:49 am »
Sure. Sorry.

"1 Ayfo zama'u ro fa'o 'orayä, mì kllpxìltu Gerasayä.
2 Krra po ramikx ftumfa uran, tutan hu tsewtx ronsem tamul ne po ftu ayslär tìkllyemä,
3 Tsapo kelku sami mì ayslär ulte kawtu tsamun yìm tsapot.
4 Fko txan nìkelsar fmalmi.
5 Fratrr sì fratxon po zamawng mì ayslär sì ayram ulte tamakuk peyä tokx fa aytskxe.
6 Krra po tsame'a Yeysu, po tamul ne po, kllwamo eo po
7 ulte zamawng nìwok: Ngal new 'upet ta oer, Yeysu, 'itan Yawäyä akxayl frato? Oe ätxäle si tsnì ngal ke zänget oet.
8 Taluna Yeysu plltxalme: Txìng fìpot tutanit, nga tsewtx ronsem!
9 Yeysul pamawm pot: Ngeyä tstxo lu 'upe? Po 'ameyng: Oeyä tstxo lu sna'o, taluna ayoeng lu pxay.
10 Ulte pol vamin Yeysut tsnì pol ke kurakx ayfot ftuma tsakllpxìltu.
11 Ro ram tsakrr apxaa sna'o ayfokoyä [poko = pig] yamom.
12 Ayvrrtepìl vamin pot, ayfo plltxame: Tung ayoet tsnì ayfo spe'e ronsemit ayfokoyä.
13 Yeysul ayfot tamung tsar ulte ayvrrtepìl txamìng tutanit ulte ayfo spame'e ronsemit ayfokoyä. Sna'o tamul nemfa 'ora ulte ayfo tamerkup.
14 Ayhawnuyu hamifwo ulte ayfol pameng fra'ut mì aysray. Nìyey aysute zama'u fte tse'a tìlenit.
15 Ayfo zama'u ne Yeysu ulte ayfo tsame'a tsa tutanit, pe lalmu spe'etu. Ronsem alaro lamu por ulte ayfo txopu sami.
16 Aysapol, pe tsalme'a fra'ut, pameng ayfor tìlenit spe'etuyä sì ayfokoyä.
17 Ulte aysutel vamin Yeysut tsnì pol hum kllpxìltuti.
18 Krra pol fpxamäkìm uranit, spuwina spe'etul vamin pot tsnì po tsun 'ì'awn ro po.
19 Slä Yeysul por ke tamung tsa'ut, ki pameng: Kä ne kelku ulte peng ngeyä soaiaru fra'ut.
20 Mawkrr tutan kamä ulte pol pameng kemit Yeysuyä mì 'änsyema tsray. Ulte frapol nìksman stamawm tsat."

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Re: Mark 5
« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2014, 11:20:20 am »
Well, I used the standard english translation of the Mark 5 1-20 [Source]
I did not correct everything because I don't know what bible version you have used.

Yeysul zeykolo tutanit a vrrtephu (I think this is the chapter's title)

1 Ayfo zama'u ro fewtusoka pa'o 'orayä, mì kllpxìltu Gerasayä.
2 Krra po ramikx ftumfa uran, tutan hu tsewtx ronsem tamul ne po ftu ayslär tìkllyemä,
3 Tsapo kelku sami mì ayslär ulte kawtu tsamun yìm tsapot.
4 Fko txan nìkelsar fmalmi.
5 Fratrr sì fratxon po zamawng mì ayslär sì ayram ulte tamakuk peyä tokx fa aytskxe.
6 Krra po tsame'a Yeysu, po tamul ne po, kllwamo eo po
7 ulte zamawng nìwok san Ngal new 'upet ta oer, Yeysu, 'itan Yawäyä akxayl frato, srak? sìk Oe ätxäle si tsnì ngal ke zänget oet.
8 Taluna Yeysu plltxalme san Txìng fìpot tutanit, nga tsewtx ronsem! (sìk)
9 Yeysu pamawm vin por teyngta Ngeyä tstxo lu 'upe? Po 'ameyng san Oeyä tstxo lu sna'o, taluna ayoeng lu pxay. (sìk)
10 Ulte pol vamin Yeysutr tsnì futa pol ke kurakx ayfot ftuma tsakllpxìltu.
11 Ro ram tsakrr apxaa sna'o ayfokoyä [poko = pig] yamom.
12 Ayvrrtepìl vamin pot, ayfo plltxame san Tung ayoetr tsnì futa ayfo spe'e ronsemit ayfokoyä. (sìk)
13 Yeysul ayfot tamung tsar ulte ayvrrtepìl txamìng tutanit ulte ayfo spame'e ronsemit ayfokoyä. Sna'o tamul nemfa 'ora ulte ayfo tamerkup.
14 Ayhawnuyu hamifwo ulte ayfol pameng fra'ut mì aysray. Nìyey aysute zama'u fte tse'a tìlenit.
15 Ayfo zama'u ne Yeysu ulte ayfo tsame'a tsa tutanit, pe lalmu spe'etu. Ronsem alaro lamu por ulte ayfo txopu sami.
16 Aysapol, pe tsalme'a fra'ut, pameng ayfor tìlenit spe'etuyä sì ayfokoyä.
17 Ulte aysutel vamin Yeysut tsnì fte pol hivum kllpxìltuti.
18 Krra pol fpxamäkìm uranit, spuwina spe'etul vamin pot tsnì po tsun 'ì'awn ro po.
19 Slä Yeysul por ke tamung tsa'ut, ki pameng san Kä ne kelku ulte peng ngeyä soaiaru fra'ut. (sìk)
20 Mawkrr tutan kamä ulte pol pameng kemit Yeysuyä mì 'änsyema tsray. Ulte frapol nìksman stamawm tsat.

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Re: Mark 5
« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2014, 11:32:20 am »
Thank you for the corrections (I know, my Na'vi isn't the best one). It was more important for me to translate the sense than word by word. Can the text now go into the Na'vi Bible? It is a very cool project, but it's also a lot of work.

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Re: Mark 5
« Reply #6 on: September 19, 2014, 11:47:05 am »
Tirea Aean could add this to the Bible on the LN Wiki (as he is the captain of this section :)). I'm also a bit curious what's his opinion/suggestion.

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