Author Topic: Is this Prologue Enticing?  (Read 1989 times)

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Offline 'Itan Atxur

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Re: Is this Prologue Enticing?
« Reply #20 on: September 15, 2011, 05:04:24 am »
I find the story has a ton of potential but agree with most of the criticisms. I kept a copy of my books intro when I wrote it originally specifically so I could compare it to what I wrote a few years later. Writing evolves as you do. I had help from other writers in forming my writing style. It can be hard to stay optimistic and keep on chugging but one thing I can promise you is that you'll never know if you don't try. Bottom line:

YOUR STORY HAS LOTS OF POTENTIAL (just to make that clear, lol :D)

Well, you've inspired me to throw my intro into the snake pit. *tosses intro towards enemy and hides like it's a live hand grenade*

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Re: Is this Prologue Enticing?
« Reply #21 on: September 16, 2011, 03:47:25 am »
Thanks. Perhaps I could resume writing after I finish school.

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