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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #60 on: January 10, 2016, 02:33:41 pm »
Nice  :)

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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #61 on: January 10, 2016, 02:35:39 pm »
Nice  :)

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I wrote my name in the bottom right corner. :)
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #62 on: January 10, 2016, 03:15:41 pm »
Nice  :)

Did you create this picture?
I wrote my name in the bottom right corner. :)

Sìltsan  :)
(I did't notice your name ...  )

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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #63 on: January 12, 2016, 04:18:45 pm »
Before you throw tomatoes at me for the mistake, notice that it was voluntary and conscious. :)
geloßt -­> gelost -> lost
pronounciation: /gɛ.lɒst/

Geloßt

Justify, justify
There is no need to cry
We can 'till we can
No need to believe you can
It can't break my heart
It can't be a broken art
There's no matter of trust
Or else you'll get gelosst

You'll read the Na'vi version this Saturday on the blog. :)
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #64 on: January 14, 2016, 07:45:35 pm »
Sad & Bizarre

Look up at the star
Look up your beloved ones
It's sad and bizarre
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #65 on: January 15, 2016, 02:16:51 pm »
Before you throw tomatoes at me for the mistake, notice that it was voluntary and conscious. :)
geloßt -­> gelost -> lost
pronounciation: /gɛ.lɒst/

Geloßt

Justify, justify
There is no need to cry
We can 'till we can
No need to believe you can
It can't break my heart
It can't be a broken art
There's no matter of trust
Or else you'll get gelosst

You'll read the Na'vi version this Saturday on the blog. :)
Nice and funny :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #66 on: January 15, 2016, 03:50:39 pm »
Ty :)
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #67 on: January 15, 2016, 04:20:46 pm »
Before you throw tomatoes at me for the mistake, notice that it was voluntary and conscious. :)
geloßt -­> gelost -> lost
pronounciation: /gɛ.lɒst/

Looks like a German word … though it’s not :-\ weird that ;D

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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #68 on: January 15, 2016, 04:23:33 pm »
Before you throw tomatoes at me for the mistake, notice that it was voluntary and conscious. :)
geloßt -­> gelost -> lost
pronounciation: /gɛ.lɒst/

Looks like a German word … though it’s not :-\ weird that ;D
I first thought it was, then I realized it's not. I kept the word. ;D
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #69 on: January 15, 2016, 04:29:05 pm »
;D ;D ;D
Sure, poetic license ;)

There is gelöst but I don’t think ist goes with the content. But never mind :)

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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #70 on: January 15, 2016, 08:16:52 pm »
Ordinary

It's happening. Impersonal pronoun.
There is nothing for you to frown.
It's happening. Impersonal sentiment.
No badness, no merriment.
Everything is normal, but go abed.
From the routine you won't shed.

This day is too ordinary.
Breakdown. My head is busy.
My head's filled by dreams.
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #71 on: January 15, 2016, 08:26:17 pm »
Interesting poem  :)

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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #72 on: January 19, 2016, 08:52:09 pm »
Tìreyterkup

It blossoms, the life's flower
In your heart has power
From which a pearl of azure drops.
It's a bud in an ocean of yellowness.
Sometimes punctuated of blueness.
It happens that it falls and drops
Dimming like a white dwarf.
A living flower can't be amorph.

Don't becry. Don't shut your cries.
...
But it's too early... Closed your eyes.
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #73 on: January 21, 2016, 04:26:05 pm »
Poetry for a hypotetical planet. ;)

If Pluto is still Planet 9 in your heart, disregard the title.
The Na'vi version will come this Saturday. :)

Planète Neuf

Dans l'océan noir des merveilles,
Tu marchais seule la veille.
Allons, nous sommes venus.
Elle est finie, ta quête.

Planète neuf, neuve planète,
Dans la famille bienvenue.
Planet Nine

In the ocean of wonder
The hide and seek is over.
You were walking secretly.

Do not worry, we have come.
Welcome to the family!
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #74 on: January 21, 2016, 04:31:55 pm »
Nice and interesting  :) (about English version, I can't speak French)

I look forward to Na'vi version  :)

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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #75 on: January 22, 2016, 02:12:54 pm »
Pluto is a planet dammit!  *marches around with a picket sign*

But, yeah, nice poem.  :D
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #76 on: January 22, 2016, 02:19:47 pm »
Pluto is a planet dammit!  *marches around with a picket sign*
;D ;D

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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #77 on: January 22, 2016, 04:09:38 pm »
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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #78 on: January 23, 2016, 02:59:42 pm »
Pluto is a planet dammit!  *marches around with a picket sign*
;D ;D

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Re: My poetry in English (und Deutsch et en français)
« Reply #79 on: January 24, 2016, 06:30:20 pm »
Cold haiku

Lonely dark winter.
Warms my heart frozen water.
Didn't we have fun?
Therefore I am

The sun's shining on 9 a.m.
The city's never been that alive.
I'm smiling therefore I am.
The quay comes to life.

The hot ground's my throne.
The summer is my kingdom.
The world inside me won't moan.

Home, home, my inside kingdom.
The sun's shining on 8 p.m.
It lights me up therefore I am.
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