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LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« on: July 24, 2012, 05:17:30 am »

Kaltxì ma oeyä eylan,


I'd like to introduce to you... my webcomic Layon Yayo, based on James Cameron's AVATAR, but not featuring any characters you may know from the movie(s), but my own OC's (original characters) and a different story on a different area on Pandora and also in a different time.


The webcomic is being published constantly (more or less), so it's not completed yet. New pages will be added whenever one is done - due to my time and energy consuming work, I can't make promises on how often that will be. But I'm trying my best. You have no idea how time consuming all those details per page are ;D


Available languages are Na'vi, English and German. If you love Na'vi, Pandora and the language, please take a look at Layon Yayo, maybe you'll like it :) At least I hope so :3





So yeah, please have a look at it if you want to and like the LY-Facebook page in order to always stay up to date. Also you're always welcome to gimme feedback of any kind, especially if you got any advice or find a mistake or whatever :)

Irayo nìli ulte Eywa ayngahu :3

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #1 on: July 24, 2012, 06:41:07 am »
Well, that looks hopefully, awaiting another parts :)

Just one things which appears to me as strange is "Susalewa zìsìt" for age. It means something like "running years" (active participle). IMHO passive participle would be better, but in Na'vi, when speaking about age is used construction "Pori solalew xx-a zìsìt" (as for him, xx years run out).
So I'd probably used Pori solalew: ?? zìsìt. Just idea.
Fìtìkangkemìri ngeyä etrìpa syayvi!
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #2 on: July 24, 2012, 07:24:05 am »
Tewti
Whoar ;D

Fì’u *txankosmanyeio’ lu :P … ulte win fìtxan :)
This is amazing … and so soon :)

Oel tsat asyinan nìpxi!
I will definitely be a regular reader

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #3 on: July 24, 2012, 07:43:17 am »
Irayo ma meylan :)

Ma Blue Elf,
yeah, I wasn't quite sure about this, slä ngaru tìyawr. I changed it :D
Irayo nìtxan, oe sìlpey tsnì oeyä tìkangkem layu sìltsan. :3

Ma Plumps,
irayo seiyi ngar nìtxan :)
Don't forget, I'll need your help (proofreading), though I guess/hope that I'll have many proofreaders in the future ;D

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #4 on: July 24, 2012, 08:52:18 am »
Don't forget, I'll need your help (proofreading), though I guess/hope that I'll have many proofreaders in the future ;D

Kea tìkin ;)

Ke layu kea tìngäzìk :)

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2012, 01:50:13 pm »
I love the idea.
I don't know if there was yet an Avatar comic strip.
My wish is that you let follow the first pages many more.  :D

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #6 on: July 28, 2012, 08:00:34 pm »
:)

Yeah, I never seen any other Avatar comics like that before, unfortunately. I would be glad if others would follow :)

And of course, no worries, I'm already working on the next pages. ;)

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #7 on: July 29, 2012, 10:30:18 am »
Wou! Txantsan! I will be reading this for sure :) keep up the good work :D

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« Reply #8 on: July 29, 2012, 12:33:07 pm »
And of course, no worries, I'm already working on the next pages. ;)
These are words we wanted to hear!
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #9 on: July 31, 2012, 07:37:53 am »
Brilliant work! I just tweeted/facebooked this. I also added this to my RSS. :) cant wait to see more

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #10 on: August 02, 2012, 09:33:24 am »
Irayo nìtxan ma pxeylan :)

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Well, a new page has been added. ;)



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« Reply #11 on: August 02, 2012, 12:02:51 pm »
Ngeyä LAYON YAYO sunu oeru nìtxan! Salew tsat rutxe! Nìwin:)

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #12 on: August 02, 2012, 12:46:45 pm »
Haha, irayo nìtxan :) Tse, kezemplltxe oe fmeiyi sivalew oeyä ayrelit apuseng nìwin ;)

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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #13 on: August 02, 2012, 01:11:33 pm »
Kosmana tìkangkemvi! :)
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Re: LAYON YAYO - ayrel apuseng nìNa'vi (a webcomic nìNa'vi)
« Reply #14 on: August 02, 2012, 02:16:08 pm »
Ma tsmuke, if you ever want to present your comic in other languages you can count on me with Hungarian.  ;)

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« Reply #15 on: August 02, 2012, 02:37:25 pm »
Irayo nìtxan ma Kamean :)

Ma P.A.'li makto,
irayo nìtxan, thanks for your offer :) Maybe I'll come back to it in the future :D

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« Reply #16 on: August 02, 2012, 03:00:54 pm »
LAYONA YAYO kefyak? :)


SEYSONÌLTSAN! Well done· love the artwork in this.

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« Reply #17 on: August 02, 2012, 03:05:24 pm »
Hrh :D ma Tirea... Srane, slä:
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Fko zivene pivlltxe san layona yayo sìk tup san layon yayo sìk nì'aw, slä oe namew sivar tsat tstxosko, steng na Toruk Makto. Oeyä 'eylanìl alu Plumps moleiok oer futa swiveylu oe syivaw oeyä ayrelur apuseng fìfya.
Actually one would have to say “layona yayo” instead of just “layon yayo” (btw, layona yayo/yayo alayon means black bird), but I wanted to use this as a proper name, similar to “Toruk Makto” (“Torukä maktoyu” would be ling. correct, but yeah). So a good friend of mine named Plumps suggested to me that I should name my comic this way. :)

http://sickdelusion.de/layonyayo/?page_id=39
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Irayo :)

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« Reply #18 on: August 02, 2012, 03:07:04 pm »
Oh! That's what my secondary thought was. i do rather like that name :)

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« Reply #19 on: August 02, 2012, 03:08:23 pm »
Me too :) First I thought of YAYO ALAYON, but I liked LAYON YAYO much better then :)

 

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