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Offline Q

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My Avatar I forgot the ears...
« on: December 29, 2009, 07:21:27 pm »
BUT it works. http://honey-sempai.deviantart.com/art/My-Avatar-148493286

This was my second non-fail attempt at photomaniping someone into something that resembled an Avatar.  Sevin? Comments? Comon! Dont make me feel like a skxawng! LOL
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Re: My Avatar I forgot the ears...
« Reply #1 on: December 29, 2009, 07:53:03 pm »
BUT it works. http://honey-sempai.deviantart.com/art/My-Avatar-148493286

This was my second non-fail attempt at photomaniping someone into something that resembled an Avatar.  Sevin? Comments? Comon! Dont make me feel like a skxawng! LOL
I think lor is more appropriate than sevin, but I could be wrong, whatever

Firstly, Kudos to getting the saturation right!  The colors vary a little too strongly though, and the greens could perhaps be blended more subtly and more homogeneously. Yer also missing stripes, and the dots need to be smaller, not purple but a very bright cyan, and also following a pattern of sorts instead of being added randomly all over the place. Also they should be symmetrical, and there shouldn't be many if any close to the mouth.  The nose also needs help, and between refining that and adding stripes, it'll really be brought together :) Find some reference from the movie, and/or have a good long look/compare at the nose of a cat. 

also, read this

it'll help :)

Good start though!


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Re: My Avatar I forgot the ears...
« Reply #2 on: December 29, 2009, 11:00:22 pm »
I think sevin would be appropriate in this case, as it is in reference to a person.

On the picture, the eyes need to be a bit further out, not just larger, and the nose wider as well.
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Re: My Avatar I forgot the ears...
« Reply #3 on: December 30, 2009, 11:19:21 pm »
Very nice for a first try

 

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