Neytiri at the Tree of Souls

Ekirä · October 18, 2011, 05:38:48 PM

Finished this last night, I drew it in Photoshop CS5 and it took about 6 hours (or something like that).

Feedback/critique is welcome! I may not change anything, but it's good to know how I should improve.

Syulang · October 18, 2011, 05:47:30 PM

This looks really good!

Hmm, improvements.... maybe some of the perspective. The main stripe on her forehead seems to be a bit far to the left than down the centre. The lips could maybe be a bit bigger. Something about the eyes seems a little off.

Other than that, it looks really good! Well done! +1

Ekirä · October 18, 2011, 07:05:34 PM

Quote from: Syulang on October 18, 2011, 05:47:30 PM
This looks really good!

Hmm, improvements.... maybe some of the perspective. The main stripe on her forehead seems to be a bit far to the left than down the centre. The lips could maybe be a bit bigger. Something about the eyes seems a little off.

Other than that, it looks really good! Well done! +1

Thank you! And I really appreciate the suggestions, I fixed the stripe as I thought looked best and made the lips a bit bigger. As for the eyes, I agree, something is a bit off. I edited it a bit more but I think I'll just leave it as it is and hope it's not terribly noticeable.

Again, thanks!

Alyara Arati · October 18, 2011, 08:24:34 PM

This is really very good!

I won't even try to give suggestions, because the extent to which I cannot draw is so extraordinary.

I do know that I like this, however.

Ekirä · October 18, 2011, 09:32:05 PM

Quote from: Alyara Arati on October 18, 2011, 08:24:34 PM
This is really very good! I won't even try to give suggestions, because the extent to which I cannot draw is so extraordinary. I do know that I like this, however.

Oh, thank you very much.

Kamean · October 19, 2011, 01:27:35 PM

Very, very good! I really love it.

+1

Ekirä · October 19, 2011, 04:42:53 PM

Quote from: Kamean on October 19, 2011, 01:27:35 PM
Very, very good! I really love it.

+1

Irayo seiyi!

'Oma Tirea · October 23, 2011, 11:28:52 PM

Kosman, ma Ekirä. I can't find too much to criticize about it, especially for my first impression

Ekirä · October 24, 2011, 08:47:27 AM

Quote from: 'Oma Tirea on October 23, 2011, 11:28:52 PM
Kosman, ma Ekirä. I can't find too much to criticize about it, especially for my first impression

Irayo seiyi ma tsmukan.

Tsäroltxe te Eyrutì Tantse'itan · October 24, 2011, 03:51:31 PM

That's really good!

Ekirä · October 24, 2011, 05:12:50 PM

Quote from: Tsäroltxe te Eyrutì Tantse'itan on October 24, 2011, 03:51:31 PM
That's really good!

Thank you! (haven't seen you in awhile

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Seze Mune · October 24, 2011, 08:25:46 PM

Ma Ekirä this is so cool! I only wish I could do half as well, ma tsmuke! You mentioned the eyes and I'm wondering if you meant that the eyelashes were not the length they are in the movie?

Ekirä · October 25, 2011, 09:38:36 PM

Quote from: Seze Mune on October 24, 2011, 08:25:46 PM
Ma Ekirä this is so cool! I only wish I could do half as well, ma tsmuke! You mentioned the eyes and I'm wondering if you meant that the eyelashes were not the length they are in the movie?

That's a good thought, the screenshot I referenced didn't show them very long but it's possible they would look much better if they were a bit longer. Thanks for the suggestion and kind words, ma tsmuke.

Seze Mune · October 25, 2011, 10:57:30 PM

nìprrte!

Ricardo · October 26, 2011, 10:27:12 AM

It's nearly perfect.

Ekirä · October 27, 2011, 12:30:29 PM

Quote from: Ricardo on October 26, 2011, 10:27:12 AM
It's nearly perfect.

Thanks!

Blue Elf · October 28, 2011, 03:30:26 PM

Wou, it looks very realisticaly! On first look I thought that the picture was taken from the movie, HRH

Ekirä · October 29, 2011, 02:28:42 PM

Quote from: Blue Elf on October 28, 2011, 03:30:26 PM
Wou, it looks very realisticaly! On first look I thought that the picture was taken from the movie, HRH

Heh, thank you!