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Started by Alaksi, February 05, 2011, 11:23:36 AM

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Alaksi

I've made a replica of Neytiri's ikran, Seze. :P It's made of clay and it's 11cm long and 12cm wide.
Here are some photos:
(Irayo, P.A.'li makto!)

I need constructive criticism on this one, because I'm going to make another one (maybe Jake's ikran) and I'd like to know if I've done any mistakes in this one.
What do you think?

Edit: yes, I know it's missing the mesaheylu, but they are too thin and they break ::) I'm currently trying to find a solution.
If I make any mistakes, either in English (I'm not a native speaker) or in Na'vi, please correct them, either in my posts or sending a PM.
Irayo!

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P.A.'li makto

I do really like it, ma tsmuke:) Very beautiful indeed! Now I feel like making one myself! I didn't notice that it lacks of the organs used for tsaheylu though...  ;D How 'bout trying to use some kind of wires for them?

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Kamean

#2
Awesome work. :)
Tìsung: In my opinion mesaheylu would be more correct because ay use for quantity more of three.
Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


P.A.'li makto

As far as I know tsaheylu does not mean the organ.  :)

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Alaksi

Quote from: Kamean on February 05, 2011, 01:54:03 PM
Awesome work. :)
Tìsung: In my opinion mesaheylu would be more correct because ay use for quantity more of three.

True.  :-[ I'll change it.

Quote from: P.A.'li makto on February 05, 2011, 01:59:29 PM
As far as I know tsaheylu does not mean the organ.  :)

I used tsaheylu because I didn't know if there was a specific name for the organ itself... We have tswìn, but I think it's only for the Na'vi tsaheylu.
And by the way, using wires looks like a good idea. I'll see what I can do. ;)
If I make any mistakes, either in English (I'm not a native speaker) or in Na'vi, please correct them, either in my posts or sending a PM.
Irayo!

"This is my timey wimey detector. It goes ding when there's stuff."
---The Doctor

Ftxavanga Txe′lan

This is very beautiful, ma Alaksi! :) Good job. ;)

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Kamean

In my opinion, we may use "tswin" for this organs. ;)
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Alaksi

#9
Irayo ma frapo!  ;)

P.A.'li makto's idea worked! I've used two wires for the mesaheylu (or meswin ;D) and they look great. Here are the photos:

If I make any mistakes, either in English (I'm not a native speaker) or in Na'vi, please correct them, either in my posts or sending a PM.
Irayo!

"This is my timey wimey detector. It goes ding when there's stuff."
---The Doctor

P.A.'li makto

Oh, perfect! I love it!  :)

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Ftxavanga Txe′lan

Very nice add! ;D It works perfectly.

Eana Tanhì


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Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.


Tsu'tey

Nice Work ! I have a Picture from Jakes Ikran, as an example:


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