New song not finished, avatar inspired (kinda...)

Started by txum tukru, September 21, 2011, 07:24:33 AM

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txum tukru

hey guys, I got a new song that i wrote up in the past couple of days that is somewhat avatar inspired.

Now the song isn't finished, mainly the song structure, mastering and diversity needs work, however this is what its like so far!

Please tell me what you think and how I can improve it.

http://soundcloud.com/edfake/help-me-name-this-song/s-xIgt9

(p.s I cant think of a name....)
pesu nga?          "who are you?"
Oe lu toktor.       "the Doctor!"
pesu?                "who?"
nì'aw, toktor.       "just, the Doctor!"

Blue Elf

Well, sounds really nice. I know nothing about music composing, so the only I can say is - I like it.
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hemmond

Nice one... You can give it almost any name, you can think of. :)
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