a child of two species Comments thread

[Niwantaw]

Guess.....

[Niwantaw]

War,
War has begun,
soon,
soon the end will come.

[Muzer]

For some reason that reminded me of "War has never been so much fun" from Cannon Fodder...

[Niwantaw]

well.
The end has been reached.
This story is at it's end.
many friends were made and many have died.
and now i ask you:
was it worth it?

[Txur Niftxavang]

Well, war never changes... It's all about money, resources, or land. Forget political views, idiology, ethnicity. That's a lie, it's a lie to take from ppl. As said in the movie, "if someone is sitting on something you want, you make them your enemy, and justify by taking it." my favorite quote. Sadly it's too true.

[Niwantaw]

any comments?
any favourite characters?
any awful typos?

[Txur Niftxavang]

 I read the Into The Jungle. I can already tell that this will be my fav.     I've become a fan after reading your stories.

[Niwantaw]

*waves hand*

"you will pay me to write more"

[Txur Niftxavang]

Well, if I had a jeb, I definitely would. Hey, if u want donation I will gladly sell some of my useless stuff IE; Comp, one of my kidneys. I dnt think my kidneys are compatible with sawtute...   

[Swoka Ikran]

Just finished reading. Excellent story. A little short compared to others I've read though.

[Niwantaw]

I write short stories because a long one I'll never finish..
i'll get sidetracked or eaten before reaching the end

[Swoka Ikran]

Ah. That explains it.

If I ever write one (maybe over the summer if I have time...), it will probably be short as well. Like you, I'd end up sidetracked with my other hobbies.

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

unlike all of you, i will be doing a offical book that will hopefully get published after im done with it...and it will have nothing to do with Avatar, im afraid.

[Niwantaw]

you need to
A) keep your ego in check
B) realise that you are getting very annoying


also i have a friend who has written a 130 or so page long story in A4 and is currently working on a second.
once that is finished he's going to try and get them both published.

so yeah it isn't that impressive saying your working on a book.

and some of us..
don't charge.
we do it for the pleasure of others reading our work and also because it's fun

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

would it be impressive if i caid that Dreamwalker's Dilema Took up 450 pages? In simple turms, if published, it would be a f***ing novel.

[Niwantaw]

what of size 8 on word?

edit: just copied and pasted all what you have done...

57 pages.... With all the other crap in it and size 12

CBA to covert it to a normal format

[ShadowMainZERO]

would it be impressive if i caid that Dreamwalker's Dilema Took up 450 pages? In simple turms, if published, it would be a f***ing novel.

450 pages is not impressive. Most books I read are somewhere between 500 and 800 pages in length. Besides, no one would publish Dreamwalker's Dilemma in the first place. Even if you did have the rights to it.

[Muzer]

I must agree - you are getting quite annoying, your ego seems to be getting the better of you. You could do with going in the Total Perspective Vortex on Frogstar World B.

[Niwantaw]

"For whosoever exalteth himself shall be abased; and he that humbleth himself shall be exalted"
'nuf said

[ShadowMainZERO]

"For whosoever exalteth himself shall be abased; and he that humbleth himself shall be exalted"
'nuf said

That's Luke 14:11 JKV, btw.