a child of two species Comments thread

[Niwantaw]

now back to the topic

what do people think of the ending?
and do you want a sequel?(although it will have to wait until after i finish na'vi in the jungle - oh yeah if you haven't read it read it... it adds a twist to things)

[Maweyatan]

I want a sequel now!!!

[ShadowMainZERO]

A sequel would be nice. It could show that the ending, while bitter-sweet, wasn't all for naught. Or you could take the darker approach and let their sacrifices be in vain. Either way, I will beta read it for you if you want.

It was a good story. It was redundant in some places, most of the characters had little to no personalities, it was obviously rushed, and

Spoiler

Fkewa's death was pointless

; but is was good nevertheless.

[Niwantaw]

Spoiler

Fkewa's death was pointless

;

you mean it upset you

[ShadowMainZERO]

No. It was just pointless. It simply gave Christian more stuff to angst about.

[Muzer]

Like Grace's death in the film?

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

i wish i hadent read the na'vi in the jungle story. it immidiatlly made me sad because of the situation.

[ShadowMainZERO]

Like Grace's death in the film?

Exactly. Good thing Grace isn't 100% dead.

I wish I hadn't read the Na'vi in the Jungle story. It immediately made me sad because of the situation.

You'll live.

P.S. Would it kill people to use the Shift key?! It's not like it's halfway across the keyboard.

[Niwantaw]

Like Grace's death in the film?

Exactly. Good thing Grace isn't 100% dead.

I wish I hadn't read the Na'vi in the Jungle story. It immediately made me sad because of the situation.

You'll live.

P.S. Would it kill people to use the Shift key?! It's not like it's halfway across the keyboard.

miserable person.

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

Like Grace's death in the film?

Exactly. Good thing Grace isn't 100% dead.

I wish I hadn't read the Na'vi in the Jungle story. It immediately made me sad because of the situation.

You'll live.

P.S. Would it kill people to use the Shift key?! It's not like it's halfway across the keyboard.

miserable person.

we see the shift key (hay that rymes!)....we just don't wish to use it.

[ShadowMainZERO]

Like Grace's death in the film?

Exactly. Good thing Grace isn't 100% dead.

I wish I hadn't read the Na'vi in the Jungle story. It immediately made me sad because of the situation.

You'll live.

P.S. Would it kill people to use the Shift key?! It's not like it's halfway across the keyboard.

miserable person.

we see the shift key (hay that rymes!)....we just don't wish to use it.

You can't rhyme "key" with "key".

*goes and cries in a corner.

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

Like Grace's death in the film?

Exactly. Good thing Grace isn't 100% dead.

I wish I hadn't read the Na'vi in the Jungle story. It immediately made me sad because of the situation.

You'll live.

P.S. Would it kill people to use the Shift key?! It's not like it's halfway across the keyboard.

miserable person.

we see the shift key (hay that rymes!)....we just don't wish to use it.

You can't rhyme "key" with "key".

*goes and cries in a corner.

see rhymes with key. i don't even have to keys in my last post.

[ShadowMainZERO]

Like Grace's death in the film?

Exactly. Good thing Grace isn't 100% dead.

I wish I hadn't read the Na'vi in the Jungle story. It immediately made me sad because of the situation.

You'll live.

P.S. Would it kill people to use the Shift key?! It's not like it's halfway across the keyboard.

miserable person.

we see the shift key (hay that rymes!)....we just don't wish to use it.

You can't rhyme "key" with "key".

*goes and cries in a corner.

see rhymes with key. i don't even have to keys in my last post.

Still doesn't work that way. If you would have had something that rhymes with "key" at the end of the sentence after the ellipsis then it would have been a rhyme.

[Niwantaw]

ARRG!

I DON'T CARE IF IT RHYMES OR NOT

GO MAKE A THREAD TO ARGUE IN BUT JUST NOT IN HERE PLEASE

[ShadowMainZERO]

ARRG!

I DON'T CARE IF IT RHYMES OR NOT

GO MAKE A THREAD TO ARGUE IN BUT JUST NOT IN HERE PLEASE

No one has been commenting on your story anyway.

[Niwantaw]

No one has been commenting on your story anyway.

THEN LET THE THREAD DIE UNTIL SOMEONE DOES.

[Muzer]

You certainly know where your shift key is... or are you one of the evil Caps Lock gang?


(Joking... please don't kill me )

[Niwantaw]

both
depends on how long it is
now comments please only