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Yeya Swizaw

#20
March 29, 2010, 12:10:13 PM
Lol

Nice story anyway :)

Have a cookie
"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

Niwantaw

#21
March 29, 2010, 04:42:10 PM
UPDATE CHAPTER 4 is up
;D
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Niwantaw

#22
March 29, 2010, 05:43:20 PM
do you prefere it in the word doc or just posted in chunks?
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Yeya Swizaw

#23
March 30, 2010, 09:39:47 AM
Word doc.
"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

Niwantaw

#24
March 30, 2010, 03:20:28 PM
Chapter 5 is up
and its now got a english teacher checking it
;D
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Niwantaw

#25
March 30, 2010, 05:35:02 PM
Chapter 6 is now up
and now it stands at 3,307 words ;D
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ShadowMainZERO

#26
March 30, 2010, 05:47:18 PM
Very good! I didn't expect this from. Seeing your RP.This is in the 10 percent.


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Niwantaw

#27
March 30, 2010, 05:49:06 PM
just expect the unexpected
surely you had worked that out from my RPing
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ShadowMainZERO

#28
March 30, 2010, 09:04:43 PM
Quote from: Tawtute akawng on March 30, 2010, 05:49:06 PM
just expect the unexpected
surely you had worked that out from my RPing

True. I didn't expect Tian to get shot in the leg nor get captured.


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

KxanìaTaronyu

#29
April 01, 2010, 06:14:13 AM Last Edit: April 01, 2010, 06:26:58 AM by KxanìaTaronyu
Quote from: Na'vi Kxanìa Taronyu on March 28, 2010, 06:54:25 PM
Quote from: Col Quaritch on March 28, 2010, 06:51:11 PM
nuts to that learn to ready typonese its the internet. Worry about spell checking if it crosses your mind or if too many blue cockroaches complain.  ::)

>:(  Ahem...There's some of us whom want to be these "blue cockroaches"".  ::) ;D  No offense taken.

Quote from: tawtute akawng on March 28, 2010, 06:53:05 PM
okay need help
need name for kindly scientist who worked with the guys father (female name)



Dr. Michelle Weaver (Gotta love Sigourney!)

Some of us ARE these "Blue cockroaches". Offence slightly taken.  ::)
"Oel kameie ayngati. Irayo ayngaru ulte Eywa ngahu. 'Ivong Na'vi aysmukan sì aysmuke. Aynga lu Eywayä ayeylan ulte aynga lu yawne oer. Kìyevame!" 

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

#30
April 01, 2010, 03:14:45 PM
weres the rest of the story?

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Niwantaw

#31
April 01, 2010, 03:18:26 PM
getting written (slowley due to not having much time to write in but now i hae 2 weeks with no school so i will get some more up PDQ)
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ShadowMainZERO

#32
April 01, 2010, 04:18:21 PM
Does anyone, by chance, know where I could put my non-Avatar related story?


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Niwantaw

#33
April 01, 2010, 04:22:02 PM
there is a site called fanfic.org (i think) that you could post it on
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ShadowMainZERO

#34
April 01, 2010, 04:31:19 PM
Quote from: Tawtute akawng on April 01, 2010, 04:22:02 PM
there is a site called fanfic.org (i think) that you could post it on

Well I knew that it's FanFiction.net. What I want to know is where on this site.


Come join the adventure in Strange Lands: A Pandoran RP!

The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Txantslusam Skxawng

#35
April 02, 2010, 06:57:31 AM
You might want to make a different page for comments of ur book, so this looks more clarifying with all the chapters and stuff
WirelessTsaheylu=Bluetooth
Inventor of the word NARF

Niwantaw

#36
April 04, 2010, 12:15:17 AM
finaly got past the block
not a massive update but more will follow now
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Niwantaw

#37
April 04, 2010, 07:16:26 PM
can someone check through the whole thing and fix any grammer fails for me and then email the fixed one to me?
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Yeya Swizaw

#38
April 05, 2010, 07:34:43 AM Last Edit: April 05, 2010, 08:16:19 AM by Yeya Swizaw
Quote from: Tawtute akawng on April 04, 2010, 07:16:26 PM
can someone check through the whole thing and fix any grammer fails for me and then email the fixed one to me?

I'm doing it.

EDIT: done
"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

Niwantaw

#39
April 07, 2010, 07:01:00 AM
okay put a PDF format up and a grammar fixed one
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