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Started by Niwantaw, March 28, 2010, 05:25:16 PM

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Niwantaw

sorry about the wait


but here is another 1275 words

now waiting on yeya for the grammar fix though

but you can read the unfixed version now
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ShadowMainZERO

Waitwaitwaitwait. "Irving"? Like "Lloyd Irving"? Awesome.


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sweardsman

i know i'm happy...but never satisfied ;)

Niwantaw

okay upgraded the second chuck to the grammar fixed version
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Niwantaw

added un grammar fixed chapter 9 onto the second chunk enjoy!


Quote from: Zelenal on April 08, 2010, 10:54:11 PM
Waitwaitwaitwait. "Irving"? Like "Lloyd Irving"? Awesome.
Irving like Christian Irving. Yeah that's me :D
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Niwantaw

okay i have started a new thread with the story on it
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ShadowMainZERO

Quote from: Tawtute akawng on April 09, 2010, 06:41:08 PM
Quote from: Zelenal on April 08, 2010, 10:54:11 PM
Waitwaitwaitwait. "Irving"? Like "Lloyd Irving"? Awesome.
Irving like Christian Irving. Yeah that's me :D

You, sir, have the coolest last name ever in my book.


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The ultimate power is found in the incorruptible light hidden deep in the darkness. You must delve into the darkest part of your heart and find that light. Once you do, never let go of it. Remember: Your heart is the greatest weapon of all.

Niwantaw

okay one question - who the hell is Lloyd Irving?
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ShadowMainZERO

Quote from: Tawtute akawng on April 10, 2010, 02:11:02 PM
okay one question - who the hell is Lloyd Irving?

Can you not use Google?

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He is the guy in the front.


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ShadowMainZERO

He can't change his own name. Well... he can, but still.


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Niwantaw

and i will change it eventually
anyways back to topic please
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Txantslusam Skxawng

I was reading and the blue gave me kinda a headache...
So I stopped with reading, I didnt wanted to copy it into Word and then change it into black, because then I would feel like it is stealing
But what have read, I liked it....
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Niwantaw

........
You make it look all nce and SOMEBODY moans.....

*goes and changes font colour*

happy?
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Txantslusam Skxawng

''Yes I am!''

Or maybe I'll try to read it in blue, if you change it back. :P ( just a joke )

( I had a long day at school and I have been using my brains too much at school )
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Niwantaw

I found the fuel for my brain so managed to write another chapter


my first major cliffhanger (i think ;D) so please don't hurt me


and the others have returned
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Nìwotxkrr Tìyawn

First time reading it and I thought it was pretty good. One thing though, I know we all love papyrus but after awhile it gets to be a bit of an eye sore. Nice solid story, hope to read more soon.
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archaic

Please sir, I want sum maw?


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Niwantaw

this is just a list of all na'vi words in it (i think) and what i think the translations are


someone correct me if i got them wrong so my story isn't full of langauge fails  :D
now i'll get back to writing

*switches back to microsft word*

conicidently listening to war on the soundtrack. Is it a good or bad omen?
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