a child of two species Comments thread

[Niwantaw]

OKAY PEOPLE CHANGED THIS THREAD TO THE COMMENTS THREAD

STORY THREAD LINK http://forum.learnnavi.org/fiction-fanfiction/a-child-of-two-species-new-thread/


file if you want to download it

[Na'vi Kxanìa Taronyu]

This is REALLY good so far.  Can't wait for the next update.  btw, if you want more people to look at this too, I would suggest uploading this to FanFiction.net

+1 Karma Kookie

[Col Quaritch]

Agreed very good but I was going to give 2 RDA cookiees till you said your not odd mentally

[Niwantaw]

irayo
now do i?
1) write more
2) sleep

[Na'vi Kxanìa Taronyu]

irayo
now do i?
1) write more
2) write even more

I go with the magical 3 - All of the above. lol

[Col Quaritch]

More Major More! Oh and thats an ORDER! Please

[nìTsìng Lekinama Yayo]

  Aw, poor guy. What's his name, anyway?

*sits and waits for more* I vote you keep going! \o/

[Niwantaw]

now look at what you have done 
you made me forget to spell check it

[Na'vi Kxanìa Taronyu]

now look at what you have done 
you made me forget to spell check it

I'm not a grammar nazi...except when I want to be.  To me the storyline matters more, and this story REALLY has some potential. 

[Col Quaritch]

nuts to that learn to ready typonese its the internet. Worry about spell checking if it crosses your mind or if too many blue cockroaches complain. 

[Niwantaw]

okay need help
need name for kindly scientist who worked with the guys father (female name)

[Na'vi Kxanìa Taronyu]

nuts to that learn to ready typonese its the internet. Worry about spell checking if it crosses your mind or if too many blue cockroaches complain. 

 Ahem...There's some of us whom want to be these "blue cockroaches"".    No offense taken.

okay need help
need name for kindly scientist who worked with the guys father (female name)

Dr. Michelle Weaver (Gotta love Sigourney!)

[Col Quaritch]

Brenda Quaritch (she didnt know he son was a BleeP)

[Col Quaritch]

nuts to that learn to ready typonese its the internet. Worry about spell checking if it crosses your mind or if too many blue cockroaches complain. 

 Ahem...There's some of us whom want to be these "blue cockroaches"".    No offense taken.

okay need help
need name for kindly scientist who worked with the guys father (female name)

Dr. Michelle Weaver (Gotta love Sigourney!)

Actually take there Sigourney is hot sci-fi all around.

[Na'vi Kxanìa Taronyu]

Sweetness    I'm sure your gonna get writer's block pretty soon, but if it's coming like this...I think this is not an attempt, it's a good one pretty far.

[Niwantaw]

damm i NEED a copy of the ASG before i can do anything on pandora realy
But i can still get there (possibly in the next few hours)

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

your story is good and, i wont lie, but i think my books better. but you have something in yours that im missing....i just cant tell what at the moment.

in any case its still good though! ceep going!

[Niwantaw]

thing thats missing = it isn't your story
i think mines just got more going on in a shorter space and less attention to detail.
now i'm going to write some more now i finaley know what is going to happen
(had an exam - finished with an hour to spare therefore planned out story)

[Yeya Swizaw]

Isn't it cheating using the name of your pet cat as the name of the cat in the story

[Niwantaw]

no....
at least i hope not.