A skxawng in Kelutral - comments

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Ekirä

#40
August 08, 2010, 10:12:07 AM
Excellent new addition. ;D

Irayo for the arrows, I do not know why they break so often....:P ;)

Puvomun

#41
August 08, 2010, 10:16:10 AM
Quote from: Ekirä on August 08, 2010, 10:12:07 AM
Irayo for the arrows, I do not know why they break so often....:P ;)
Nìprrte, and maybe we will figure it out someday! ;)
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Niwantaw

#42
August 08, 2010, 11:08:56 AM
I'm off to kill the tawtute >:D
Only mostly AWOL.

Puvomun

#43
August 08, 2010, 11:35:00 AM
I pound personal head and can't find help in the dictionary and the nutshell.
How to pluralise uniltìranyu? Ayuniltìranyu feels wrong...
Maybe someone knows...
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Muzer

#44
August 08, 2010, 12:53:21 PM Last Edit: August 08, 2010, 12:59:23 PM by Muzer
What's wrong with "Ayuniltìranyu"? It's the correct one.

(Oh, I'll give you some Na'vi corrections when I have more time, there are a few for the recent chapter)
[21:42:56] <@Muzer> Apple products used to be good, if expensive
[21:42:59] <@Muzer> now they are just expensive

Puvomun

#45
August 08, 2010, 12:56:57 PM
Quote from: Muzer on August 08, 2010, 12:53:21 PM
What's wrong with "Ayuniltìranyu"?

I guess there is nothing wrong with it, it just 'feels' wrong to my internal language sense. It's been known to harrass me more often though.

And thank you for the corrections, in advance. Take your time, I can make mistakes faster than you can correct them. ;)
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

'Ì'awn Menari

#46
August 08, 2010, 07:05:49 PM
great 2nd chapter =D
Lord and Lady Bless )O(
and before I forget...
Eywa ngahu! =D

Puvomun

#47
August 08, 2010, 11:00:46 PM
Quote from: 'Ì'awn Menari on August 08, 2010, 07:05:49 PM
great 2nd chapter =D
Glad you like it. I already made a start with the next one. :)
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Seykxetskxe te Vawm 'Ewan'ite (Kalin Kato)

#48
August 09, 2010, 09:09:14 AM
Puvomun!!!! I loved it!!!! Very awesome, I could picture everything! And now I understand the Children's spng--where it came from!  :D  I loved your story :)

Puvomun

#49
August 09, 2010, 09:51:53 AM
Quote from: Kalin Kato on August 09, 2010, 09:09:14 AM
Puvomun!!!! I loved it!!!! Very awesome, I could picture everything! And now I understand the Children's spng--where it came from!  :D  I loved your story :)
:D I am glad you like the story so far!
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

tsamna

#50
August 09, 2010, 11:44:00 AM
This third chapter is good. I like the everyday things you incorporate into the story. Irayo ma povomun. Eywa Ngahu.
Tsamna
Go climbing, its better for you than xbox.

Nusumea Tirea

#51
August 11, 2010, 12:09:47 AM
Very nice story. Irayo ma puvomun.

Atsawl

#52
August 11, 2010, 04:00:27 AM
Yeah nice story

Puvomun

#53
August 12, 2010, 12:52:07 PM
I just posted chapter 4 of the story...
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

'Ì'awn Menari

#54
August 12, 2010, 04:21:00 PM
Sweet i got to help him learn to ride a pa'li XD.  i like how you brought Rakan into it XD and the kava. 

Txonway: i'm surprised u kept ur patientience with Jakesully...
Me: i can be very patient, and Puvomun got it down ma yawne...
Lord and Lady Bless )O(
and before I forget...
Eywa ngahu! =D

Nusumea Tirea

#55
August 12, 2010, 04:55:15 PM
I like it. It's nice to imagine some of our forum members in your story.

Seykxetskxe te Vawm 'Ewan'ite (Kalin Kato)

#56
August 12, 2010, 08:12:21 PM
Once again,I really liked it :) I was actually watching Avatar yesterday and remembered your stories and I could picture them like a "behind the scenes" kind of thing. I look forward to read more of them,ma tsmukan! :D

Puvomun

#57
August 12, 2010, 11:42:40 PM
Ftxozä you still like what I put out. :)
I am (slowly, because of too much overtime this week) working on the next chapter.
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Puvomun

#58
August 13, 2010, 01:40:47 PM
Uh-oh... I now have Tawtewng and Rakan in a verbal battle...
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Seykxetskxe te Vawm 'Ewan'ite (Kalin Kato)

#59
August 13, 2010, 02:00:06 PM
Quote from: Puvomun on August 13, 2010, 01:40:47 PM
Uh-oh... I now have Tawtewng and Rakan in a verbal battle...

:o sounds interesting!
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