A skxawng in Kelutral - comments

[Puvomun]

Kaltxì, ma tsmukan,

awsome work! I'm still grinning since the start of the chapter.

Just visiualize that whole group sitting around Jack singing.
OME what a picture

Irayo for the kind words. Ftxozä you like the chapter! It became what it is thanks to your contribution, which I think is magnificent.

[Nusumea Tirea]

And many many thanks to Le'eylan for the corrections 

[Puvomun]

And many many thanks to Le'eylan for the corrections 

Mllte, her helping you so fast was great! Irayo, ma Le'eylan!

['Ì'awn Menari]

AWWWWWWWWWWW you got Txonway down pat *glomps*

awesome chapters ^^

[Puvomun]

AWWWWWWWWWWW you got Txonway down pat *glomps*

Ohhh! Glad about both thats!!

[Niwantaw]

WOOOOOOOOOOOO I AVOIDED THE SINGING (I think)

[Puvomun]

WOOOOOOOOOOOO I AVOIDED THE SINGING (I think)

You may live to regret that comment.... Waahahahahahahaaa!!

*runs off to sharpen quill and grind inkstone

[Niwantaw]

Oh s***.

[Puvomun]

Language question again... "It is good (to do something)"
The "it is good" part... (meaning of 'I feel good') I translated that by "Lu sìltsan", which probably is mostly wrong, lacking my skill with in-, pre- and suffixes. Any advice from the gurus? Irayo! (I do learn from this, really!)

['Ì'awn Menari]

Oh s***.

HRH XD

[Muzer]

Language question again... "It is good (to do something)"
The "it is good" part... (meaning of 'I feel good') I translated that by "Lu sìltsan", which probably is mostly wrong, lacking my skill with in-, pre- and suffixes. Any advice from the gurus? Irayo! (I do learn from this, really!)

You would use fwa here. This is used when you wish to use a whole sentence or clause as a noun in another. So in this case, you could have:

Lu sìltsan fwa kemo si

[Puvomun]

Lu sìltsan fwa kemo si

Thank you so much for this extensive reply!

[Lolet]

AWWWWWWWWWWW you got Txonway down pat *glomps*

awesome chapters ^^

Using real LN members and their mates was a GRAND idea, btw.

[Puvomun]

Using real LN members and their mates was a GRAND idea, btw.

HRH! It mainly constituted of laziness, as that saved me thinking up characters! 

But I am really pleased, happy, nitram that you like it! I am quite certain you are going to like the end of the chapter 7 / start of chapter 8. Rakan might be a wee bit less amused, but hey, he'll live.
These two (1.5 so) are 'in progress', in the raw, and need a lot of hammering and chisel-work before they are acceptable for LNa'vi consumption.

[Lolet]

I like all the chapters, I smile when I read them.  Rakan will probably pout though. hrh 

[archaic]

I like.

['Ì'awn Menari]

Both me and txonway like the chapters ^^. 

[Lolet]

Both me and txonway like the chapters ^^. 

Haha Txonway's so nice. 

['Ì'awn Menari]

Both me and txonway like the chapters ^^. 

Haha Txonway's so nice. 

that's why i love him ^^

[Puvomun]

Lolet and Rakan will have an interesting scene in chapter 7...