A skxawng in Kelutral - comments

[Lolet]

Very good, ma Puvomun!     

[Puvomun]

Irayo, I am glad you liked it.

[tsamna]

This is good please continue writing it
tsamna

[Puvomun]

Looks like it is time to open up one of these. And irayo, everyone, for reading the snippet I did.
I shall confer with my blue alter ego on how to proceed.

[Niwantaw]

With a crazed tawtute attacking the hometree

['Ì'awn Menari]

that's epic! =D

[Lolet]

I'M IN THE STORY! YES!!!

Write more, O great author!

[Muzer]

Moved some comments from the story thread. See the sticky.

[Ekirä]

Love it, ma Puvomun!

Be sure to post the second chapter soon.

[Tsamsiyu92]

Nice story and nice use of the usernames, however, some (or possibly one) of them would not fit in as good as Na'vi names.

Keep it up

[Puvomun]

Nice story and nice use of the usernames, however, some (or possibly one) of them would not fit in as good as Na'vi names.

I know. But it's more the fun of the idea to have LN clan members in the story than to stick to the original too rigidly. Kind of creative freedom.

[Lolet]

Nice story and nice use of the usernames, however, some (or possibly one) of them would not fit in as good as Na'vi names.

I know. But it's more the fun of the idea to have LN clan members in the story than to stick to the original too rigidly. Kind of creative freedom.

I think it's a good idea. I mean, we're the ones reading it.

[Puvomun]

Irayo, ma Lolet.

I need to edit/rework the next chapter, which I finished last evening. (You're in it again.)
Hopefully I have time for that this evening.

[Lolet]

Ooh goodies! 

[Puvomun]

I am almost done with the second chapter of the story.

Note: I may have some words wrong here, corrections are welcome, so I can update the words in the chapter.
For instance I used "waysiyu" for singer (way=song), maybe that should be "wayu"? And I used "ma 'ewan" for "young one".
Also, for the sake of easier writing, I have made some 'simplifications' to names. I hope the bearers of those don't mind.

[Muzer]

I think waytu would be better...

[Puvomun]

Irayo, I changed it.

[Ekirä]

Wouldn't rolyu work better? I don't know, but rol means 'to sing', whereas way just means 'song'.

[Puvomun]

Wouldn't rolyu work better? I don't know, but rol means 'to sing', whereas way just means 'song'.

I thought of that too, and could not decide...

[Ekirä]

I just read the second chapter--love it!

Keep up the good work, ma Puvomun!