After the RDA - comments

[Puvomun]

Oh-oh flying to the forbidden stony trees. Be careful out there!

Seriously. I devised some very nasty stuff there. But I am not telling anyone yet!

[Lolet]

A dreamy look was on her face for a moment.

Whose face would this be?

( Writing slowed down. Headache's back )

The new chapter is muy siltsan.   

[Nusumea Tirea]

OH-OH! Why do I think suddenly about radiation poisoning ?

[Puvomun]

The new chapter is muy siltsan.   

I thought you would like that one.

[Lolet]

The new chapter is muy siltsan.   

I thought you would like that one.

I was pleasantly surprised that you put in the sexy muscles. 

[Puvomun]

I was pleasantly surprised that you put in the sexy muscles. 

It was too funny not to use

[Lolet]

I laughed at the big mouth part. 

[Puvomun]

I laughed at the big mouth part. 

HRH!! I could not resist!

[Lolet]

I laughed at the big mouth part. 

HRH!! I could not resist!

But the rest was so nice, it made me smile.

[Puvomun]

I laughed at the big mouth part. 

HRH!! I could not resist!

But the rest was so nice, it made me smile.

I am glad that you like the chapter. Written over 35000 words by now, and the story is by far not finished yet.
I did almost mix up dead bodies, but I discovered that in time.

[Lolet]

Dead bodies complicate everything. I speak from experience. 

[Puvomun]

Dead bodies complicate everything. I speak from experience. 

Bwahahahahaa!! Yes, you are having a ghost of a time IMing!!

[Lolet]

Dead bodies complicate everything. I speak from experience. 

Bwahahahahaa!! Yes, you are having a ghost of a time IMing!!

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[Puvomun]

Noticed I screwed up a last name somewhere. May fix that sometime, but not sure.
Chapter 25 is up now.
Tomorrow I go back to work.

[Puvomun]

Writing fool. Does that make me a skxwang apamrelsi?

[Puvomun]

Listened to part 3 of the RadioAvatar podcast. That seriously puts a stop to writing, it's great fun and wonderfully done.

http://blog.radioavatar.com/

[archaic]

Confession time, I've been so focused on getting scene 28 wrapped up that I've not been keeping up to date with your story,  which pains me


I have two more scenes to go, one needs final tweak, then posting. The last, the epilogue, needs lots of work, but there's a bit that's part written already, then I can catch up,
Maybe even listen to the pod casts too. 

[Puvomun]

Kaltxì archaic,

Don't worry about it, the text isn't going anywhere. I'm glad you are finally making progress with your own writing. I know how bad it sucks when you're stuck and no way to get out of it.

[Nusumea Tirea]

Congratulations!
You reached the 50.040 nanowrimo wordcount in less that half the time with a really nice story. 

[Puvomun]

Congratulations!
You reached the 50.040 nanowrimo wordcount in less that half the time with a really nice story. 

Srane! Oel omum, ulte nìtxan nitram oe lu!