Avatar 2 (Written by Aytanin) Questions, comments and ideas

[Aytanin]

Okay so i put up the first 2 scenes of my version of Avatar 2.

if you have Any questions, comments or ideas that you'd like me to use, please let me know in this topic.

And if Any of you would like to know this is my First Avatar fanfiction.

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I likes, bit short, but good so far.   


Maw pleeze.