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Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« on: June 10, 2010, 05:06:28 am »
As requested by literally some people.
Avatar 3

Scene 1
« Last Edit: November 08, 2010, 12:04:31 pm by archaic »
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2010, 05:44:39 am »
Looks good so far!
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2010, 07:50:09 am »
Amazing!

I like it... :)
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #3 on: June 10, 2010, 07:51:18 am »
More... Need... Mooore!

LOL Cool as always :)

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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2010, 01:44:34 pm »
Scene 2


« Last Edit: November 08, 2010, 12:09:33 pm by archaic »
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2010, 03:23:17 am »
My bad, the last section of scene 2 got left off, oops.
So here it is .....


Scene 2a
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #6 on: June 12, 2010, 11:29:08 am »
I had planned this scene to be far longer, with more dialogue, but I wasn't happy, whatever way I played it, however this emerged from the fog of it.
But it is rather short.


Scene 3

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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #7 on: June 12, 2010, 12:11:39 pm »
Wow. All's I can say is wow.
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2010, 02:29:08 pm »
Can't wait to find out more :)

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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #9 on: June 12, 2010, 06:05:23 pm »
How'd they find out so fast? What with the speed of light and all... (sorry to pick holes :P)
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2010, 03:58:36 am »
Superluminal communication, to quote the activists survival guide .....

Function: Interstellar communication, currently in use between Earth
and the RDA facilities on Pandora

Description: An instantaneous communication system made pos-
sible by a loophole in the laws of physics



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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #11 on: June 13, 2010, 04:14:44 am »
Ah, I never read the ASG, didn't know about that - shiny.
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #12 on: June 13, 2010, 04:58:28 am »
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #13 on: June 13, 2010, 04:50:43 pm »
Ah, I never read the ASG, didn't know about that - shiny.

Your local Barnes & Noble probably has it.
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #14 on: June 13, 2010, 04:55:38 pm »
Who and who?

I'll check in Waterstones next time I go ;)
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #15 on: June 13, 2010, 04:57:26 pm »
Who and who?

I'll check in Waterstones next time I go ;)

LOL, if its a big bookshop, it should have it.
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #16 on: June 13, 2010, 05:47:15 pm »
Our one is the average "large-unit" high street shop. I don't know the average sizes of shops in the US (presumably that's where you live), so I can't really give you any comparisons.

If not I'll grab it online.
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #17 on: June 14, 2010, 07:12:46 am »
It's available at all good book shops*
And if they don't have it on the shelf, they should be able to order it in for you.


Meanwhile here is scene 4

*Definition of a good book shop: One that has the Survival Guide in stock.
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #18 on: June 14, 2010, 10:17:00 am »
Quote
We have all neglected our human bodies, but I must ask every one of you here, that you turn yours into the samsayu tsamsiyu your avatar already is.

edited for spelling.

Our one is the average "large-unit" high street shop. I don't know the average sizes of shops in the US (presumably that's where you live), so I can't really give you any comparisons.

If not I'll grab it online.

Umm, the bookshop i have about half an hours drive from me is about the size of a large school gymnasium, and thats just the first floor. Its three floors.
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Re: Avatar 3, by Archaic.
« Reply #19 on: June 14, 2010, 10:28:31 am »
o_O

You have big book shops... lol :P

(Though I do live in quite a crap town - Salisbury's bookshop is a little better but still much smaller than 3 floors worth :P)
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