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Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« on: March 25, 2010, 07:38:42 am »

I'm working on an Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it?

Would any one here want to read it?
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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #1 on: March 25, 2010, 12:53:26 pm »
I would read it.  You could just break it up into pieces and do it in multiple posts if you wanted (like the fanfics here do).

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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #2 on: March 25, 2010, 04:53:29 pm »
Sounds Cool, I'll take a look.

Posting it could be fanfiction, on go daddy, or other similar file share, or google docs.
It is free, and baring any serious desires for hacking, should be a safe place to keep it.

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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #3 on: March 26, 2010, 04:43:38 am »
 I did think I might post it something kinda like this.

Scene 1

Scene 2

Scene 3

...

Scene 42

Credits

Except there won't be 42 scenes, maybe 24.

And its still a big if.

edit: Spelling
« Last Edit: March 28, 2010, 09:00:17 am by archaic »
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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #4 on: March 26, 2010, 05:13:01 am »
Love those credits!  LOL!

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« Reply #5 on: March 28, 2010, 09:01:27 am »
Irayo, I just hope I don't offend James Horner.

I've put together my notes and Ideas. I kind of got a mini synopsis for each scene now, with a couple of scenes fully written out, in first draft only.
Looks like 22 scenes, atm.
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« Reply #6 on: March 28, 2010, 10:49:06 am »
I thought I'd throw one of the finished scenes out there, It's scene 2, out of 22.

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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #7 on: March 28, 2010, 01:43:07 pm »
Thats pretty darn good. The bar scene might be misconstrued as a throwback to the first movie, but other than that it looks good.
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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #8 on: March 28, 2010, 02:03:21 pm »
Thats pretty darn good. The bar scene might be misconstrued as a throwback to the first movie, but other than that it looks good.

Bars are convenient, I have one I can walk to. =)  It should have been a RDA Starbucks though LOLZ.
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« Reply #9 on: March 28, 2010, 02:06:29 pm »
Thats pretty darn good. The bar scene might be misconstrued as a throwback to the first movie, but other than that it looks good.

Bars are convenient, I have one I can walk to. =)  It should have been a RDA Starbucks though LOLZ.

Yea, but bars hurt when you walk into them. LOL, RDA Starbucks ftw.
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« Reply #10 on: March 29, 2010, 10:28:25 am »
Irayo
The scene was intentionally hinting at the first movie,


I'll throw out another scene I got finished.
I'm pretty pleased with this, scene three.
But be warned, its much harsher and bleaker than the above, much darker too, but (hope fully) not actually disturbing.
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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #11 on: March 29, 2010, 02:01:31 pm »
Wow, powerful scene. If that were to be included and spun into the actual Avatar 2 script, that would be great.
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« Reply #12 on: April 06, 2010, 12:37:45 pm »
Yeah, that would be way cool. I don't expect it will, as if Cameron the needs help!
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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #13 on: April 07, 2010, 12:20:43 pm »
Looks pretty good ;D
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« Reply #14 on: April 07, 2010, 06:21:22 pm »
So do we have any more parts of your script coming our way?
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« Reply #15 on: April 08, 2010, 04:27:07 am »
OK here are most of the other scenes I've finished so far....

Scene 4


Scene 5


Scene 6
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« Reply #16 on: April 08, 2010, 05:44:36 am »
Please forgive the double post, but I'd exceeded the 20000 word limit.

Scene 7


Scene 8

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« Reply #17 on: April 09, 2010, 11:10:42 am »
Feedback anyone?
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Re: Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.
« Reply #18 on: April 09, 2010, 11:31:37 am »
hadn't expected the stowaway

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« Reply #19 on: April 09, 2010, 11:54:42 am »
The earthlings had to bring nukes, only logical, having lost pandora ("nuke the place from orbit, its the only way to be sure"). So I needed a way to dispose of them.
Making the stowaway a viable entity (remember the need to go without food, water or oxygen for 6 years, can't be a robot, coz they're logical and would have just killed crew and passengers) has a big affect on the movie and my vision for Avatar 3 also.

I'll try and get more posted soon, just need to write it!
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