Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it.

Started by archaic, March 25, 2010, 07:38:42 AM

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I'm working on an Avatar2 script, If I complete it how do I post it?

Would any one here want to read it?
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I would read it.  You could just break it up into pieces and do it in multiple posts if you wanted (like the fanfics here do).

Txur’Itan

#2
Sounds Cool, I'll take a look.

Posting it could be fanfiction, on go daddy, or other similar file share, or google docs.
It is free, and baring any serious desires for hacking, should be a safe place to keep it.

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archaic

#3
 I did think I might post it something kinda like this.

Scene 1

Scene 2

Scene 3

...

Scene 42

Credits

Except there won't be 42 scenes, maybe 24.

And its still a big if.

edit: Spelling
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archaic

Irayo, I just hope I don't offend James Horner.

I've put together my notes and Ideas. I kind of got a mini synopsis for each scene now, with a couple of scenes fully written out, in first draft only.
Looks like 22 scenes, atm.
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archaic

I thought I'd throw one of the finished scenes out there, It's scene 2, out of 22.

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Thats pretty darn good. The bar scene might be misconstrued as a throwback to the first movie, but other than that it looks good.
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Quote from: Tukruyä Tsamsiyu on March 28, 2010, 01:43:07 PM
Thats pretty darn good. The bar scene might be misconstrued as a throwback to the first movie, but other than that it looks good.

Bars are convenient, I have one I can walk to. =)  It should have been a RDA Starbucks though LOLZ.
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Quote from: Txur'Itan on March 28, 2010, 02:03:21 PM
Quote from: Tukruyä Tsamsiyu on March 28, 2010, 01:43:07 PM
Thats pretty darn good. The bar scene might be misconstrued as a throwback to the first movie, but other than that it looks good.

Bars are convenient, I have one I can walk to. =)  It should have been a RDA Starbucks though LOLZ.

Yea, but bars hurt when you walk into them. LOL, RDA Starbucks ftw.
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archaic

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Irayo
The scene was intentionally hinting at the first movie,


I'll throw out another scene I got finished.
I'm pretty pleased with this, scene three.
But be warned, its much harsher and bleaker than the above, much darker too, but (hope fully) not actually disturbing.
And I didn't have three Na'vi names, so I've put in ____ instead. I would welcome help here.
My na'vi is not good enough for the dialogue here, so I've cheated. I would also welcome help here.
One miss-spelling of Na'vi is intentional, to show the person doesn't know how to say it correctly.

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Wow, powerful scene. If that were to be included and spun into the actual Avatar 2 script, that would be great.
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archaic

Yeah, that would be way cool. I don't expect it will, as if Cameron the needs help!
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Looks pretty good ;D
And who knows James Cameron is desperately in need of some inspiration xD but dont think so
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So do we have any more parts of your script coming our way?
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OK here are most of the other scenes I've finished so far....

Scene 4


Scene 5


Scene 6
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#16
Please forgive the double post, but I'd exceeded the 20000 word limit.

Scene 7


Scene 8

Edit: waynefleet removed
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hadn't expected the stowaway

TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!

*sits waiting for more*
Only mostly AWOL.

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#19
The earthlings had to bring nukes, only logical, having lost pandora ("nuke the place from orbit, its the only way to be sure"). So I needed a way to dispose of them.
Making the stowaway a viable entity (remember the need to go without food, water or oxygen for 6 years, can't be a robot, coz they're logical and would have just killed crew and passengers) has a big affect on the movie and my vision for Avatar 3 also.

I'll try and get more posted soon, just need to write it!
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