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Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments/feedback.
« on: December 06, 2010, 01:43:24 am »
OK then, so who's going to write this crossover fan fic?

you.

Bump! What's happening with this? :D
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #1 on: December 06, 2010, 02:58:30 am »
I quite enjoyed!  If I might point out, however, you have a little...issue with remembering whether you're writing in present or past tense.  It's not an uncommon problem, but do keep an eye on it  ;)

Knowing, though, that you never intended this to actually go anywhere and might not have been paying all that close attention, I'll forgive it this time :-*

Looking forward to more!

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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #2 on: December 06, 2010, 04:50:49 am »
Well, actually I originally wrote the first part in past tense, but changed my mind before posting and altered it, it was a one off piece at that point, no more would be written.
But then I wrote the second piece, in past tense, having forgotten the last minute change of tense in part 1.
I only realized later, as I was burying it in the spam section, it didn't seem that important at the time.


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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #3 on: December 06, 2010, 04:55:24 am »
hehe I figured as much.  The tense actually changed near the end of the second part, though, but yeah, I tend to avoid writing in the present tense as much as I possibly can, I find it a little...awkward to read.  But hey, that's just my own personal preference, you write it however it feels best to you.  I've seen present-tense done very well, but it does tend to be the refuge of immature and inexperienced writers so that often makes me wary of it.

(please note I'm not saying you are either one of these, you have an obvious level of skill far above such...amateurs ;) )

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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #4 on: December 06, 2010, 06:53:58 am »
HRH awesome. I never got around to reading your second "do not read" post in the 90002 posts thread, so I'm glad you posted it again. ;D

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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2010, 06:45:50 pm »
Third piece posted. ;)
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #6 on: December 12, 2010, 02:47:41 pm »
And a forth.
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #7 on: December 12, 2010, 02:50:23 pm »
LOVE this one. :D

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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #8 on: December 12, 2010, 05:45:37 pm »
Blushes :-[
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #9 on: December 13, 2010, 01:39:49 am »
I have only one word about that ending:

snerk! ;D ;D ;D

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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #10 on: December 13, 2010, 06:24:05 pm »
Nice!!!! ;D I like the suspense. ::)

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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #11 on: December 15, 2010, 04:12:18 pm »
Part 6 now posted.
We don't know much about earth in 2154, where most of this piece is set, so I kind of cut to the chase a little. :o
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #12 on: December 15, 2010, 05:05:10 pm »
I like it. ;D Although imagining Toothless with an exopack is...interesting. ::)

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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #13 on: December 16, 2010, 05:12:56 am »
I know, but he has to be able to breath. ;)
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #14 on: December 16, 2010, 05:19:07 am »
Sran. ;) And I bet he's cute in an exopack. ::)

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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #15 on: December 22, 2010, 08:39:14 am »
Part 7 posted.
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #16 on: December 25, 2010, 01:02:51 am »
Sadly there will have to be a brief pause in this. I hope to return to it in the new year.
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments.
« Reply #17 on: December 31, 2010, 07:56:55 am »
Part 8 now posted.
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments/feedback.
« Reply #18 on: January 01, 2011, 05:33:14 pm »
Not sure if anyone is reading this, but Part 9 is now posted.

It's a bit shorter than the last part, and I wouldn't worry about what Hiccup mumbled, all will become clear later.
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Re: Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments/feedback.
« Reply #19 on: January 01, 2011, 06:47:06 pm »
I'm still reading it. ;D I just don't comment every time. ::)

But I still wanna know what he said. :P

 

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