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archaic

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Maw posted.


Quiet here.
[Watches tumble weed blow past]

Found here
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya

Just finished reading the latest chapter, was good stuff!  >.> except, um (and a lot of people seem to do this) at the very end:  Night Furry?  we can has fuzzy Toothless? ;) ;D

archaic

Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya


archaic

Thank you, :D

I should try to work on my spelling though.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

More spelling mistakes posted, cunningly disguised as fanfic as before.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya

That chapter is made of awesome, just so you know

Only, I was confused.  What were you trying to say when Hiccup saw the floating mountain?

archaic

Ooops .....
Quote from: archaic on March 19, 2011, 03:51:45 PM
Rain was imminent, Far off lightening flashed, it illuminated what appeared to be a floating mountain. They both was it. Hiccup had heard of the Hallelujah Mountains, but couldn't recall where they were in relation to Hell's Gate. Not close, if he remembered correctly.

This should have read "They both saw it."

Thanks, it's good to get feed back.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya

ohhhhh! Now it makes sense! ;D  I turned that over and over in my head but somehow I didn't think to flip "was" into "saw"

archaic

Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

And another, I'm annoyed with myself, these are taking me too long, not really sure why
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya


archaic

Thanks, I'll try not to.

Anywho, maw posted.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

And some maw, quicker that expected, was feeling inspired. Plus I have a scene in mind that's coming up soon, so working towards that. :D
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya

LOL now you have me curious about Trudy >.>

archaic

In the old fan fic that she was the daughter of the Venezuelan dictator and his wife, but won't talk about it.
Kind of witness protection kind of thing, or maybe she and her brother are just plain running away.

I've not decided whether to keep with that, or not.
Pretty sure you're the only person reading it now.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

Another selections of miss speillngs and thai po's.

A coming together of a lot of part formed ideas in this installment. I guess Jake will be sleeping on the couch after this one! Sorry Jake.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya

*snerk*  So basically half the chapter was spent having wives chew out their hubbies  ;D perfect!

archaic

Yep, Astrid because Hiccup came back without Toothless, Neytiri because Jake came back with Toothless.

I hope I managed to keep the feel of arguments true to their characters.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.