Avatar/HTTYD Crossover, coments/feedback.

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Quote from: archaic on October 01, 2010, 10:47:23 AM
Quote from: archaic on June 28, 2010, 08:09:33 AM
Quote from: Payoang on June 21, 2010, 02:55:13 PM
Quote from: archaic on May 29, 2010, 09:36:25 AM
OK then, so who's going to write this crossover fan fic?

Quote from: Tawtewng on May 29, 2010, 09:51:12 AM
you.

Bump! What's happening with this? :D
Archaic is on the run.

Last sighted heading for the border, fast!

Occasional stops at safe houses, and movie theaters.


Guess I didn't run fast enough.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya

I quite enjoyed!  If I might point out, however, you have a little...issue with remembering whether you're writing in present or past tense.  It's not an uncommon problem, but do keep an eye on it  ;)

Knowing, though, that you never intended this to actually go anywhere and might not have been paying all that close attention, I'll forgive it this time :-*

Looking forward to more!

archaic

Well, actually I originally wrote the first part in past tense, but changed my mind before posting and altered it, it was a one off piece at that point, no more would be written.
But then I wrote the second piece, in past tense, having forgotten the last minute change of tense in part 1.
I only realized later, as I was burying it in the spam section, it didn't seem that important at the time.


:-[
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya

hehe I figured as much.  The tense actually changed near the end of the second part, though, but yeah, I tend to avoid writing in the present tense as much as I possibly can, I find it a little...awkward to read.  But hey, that's just my own personal preference, you write it however it feels best to you.  I've seen present-tense done very well, but it does tend to be the refuge of immature and inexperienced writers so that often makes me wary of it.

(please note I'm not saying you are either one of these, you have an obvious level of skill far above such...amateurs ;) )

Ekirä

HRH awesome. I never got around to reading your second "do not read" post in the 90002 posts thread, so I'm glad you posted it again. ;D

archaic

Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Ekirä


archaic

Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Amaya

I have only one word about that ending:

snerk! ;D ;D ;D

Ekirä


archaic

Part 6 now posted.
We don't know much about earth in 2154, where most of this piece is set, so I kind of cut to the chase a little. :o
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Ekirä

I like it. ;D Although imagining Toothless with an exopack is...interesting. ::)

archaic

I know, but he has to be able to breath. ;)
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Ekirä

Sran. ;) And I bet he's cute in an exopack. ::)

archaic

Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

Sadly there will have to be a brief pause in this. I hope to return to it in the new year.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

archaic

Not sure if anyone is reading this, but Part 9 is now posted.

It's a bit shorter than the last part, and I wouldn't worry about what Hiccup mumbled, all will become clear later.
Pasha, an Avatar story, my most recent fanfic, Avatar related, now complete.

The Dragon Affair my last fanfic, non Avatar related.

Ekirä

I'm still reading it. ;D I just don't comment every time. ::)

But I still wanna know what he said. :P