Beta Reader needed (hopefully I'm in the right place)

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I've got this nagging muse in my head and I've written like 3 different versions of the same story topic, or at least starts to stories... and I'm not sure which one I like best... I need somebody to be like a sounding board and to correct grammar/spelling (maybe help with Na'vi words)... I tried to find a beta reader on ff.net but nobody really jumped out at me as somebody I wanted to work with... so I'm hoping maybe somebody here can help.

Edit: the nagging muse that keeps bugging me, wants me to write a story about Neytiri's first reaction to either seeing Jake's human form at the mobile shack, or Jake telling Neytiri about his injury in between Jake's training sessions... I haven't figured out which scenario I like best...

[hì'ia tuté]

still in need of a beta reader... 

[Human No More]

Sorry, I can't help that much with Na'vi parts, but I can with English.

[Blue Elf]

Well, if you need help with Na'vi, I can to try...

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mostly what I need is somebody to read my three stories (which are all dealing with the same main topic) and tell me which is best, in their opinion and then help me beta that story.

[Tanri]

Kaltxì ma hì'i tuté.
Txo ngaru mi lu tìkin a srung si fte ftxivey vurit fu piveng tsavurit nìNa'vi, rutxe fpive' upxaret oer.
Ke tsun oe pänutivìng ke'ut, taluna ke fnan oel melì'fyati nìwotx alu Na'vi sì 'Ìnglìsì, slä tsun fmivi.