Bionic Arms and Pandora, THE OFFICAL CHAT THREAD (As nominated by Nume)

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

Hey gang! You're looking for the story, Bionic Arms and Pandora! It's moved to a new thread, this is now the offical chat thread, so go ahead and read though here, but the real story awaits you over HERE! Follow the link and read away! The story has only just started...

[Brainiac]

Sounds great! I'm eagerly waiting for part 2 

[Maweya tirea]

yes, very interesting.

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

Head up to the first post! Importen things up there kiddys!

[Maweya tirea]

keep it coming, this is a good read

[Tìng Eywatikìte'e]

Ooo, I enjoyed. Though the color changing eyes confused me. These are humans remember! Don't fall into the trap of Mary Sues.

[Hufwe Makto]

keep it coming! this is great!

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

Ooo, I enjoyed. Though the color changing eyes confused me. These are humans remember! Don't fall into the trap of Mary Sues.

No worries. No Mary/Marty Sues/Stues around here. I'm being careful.

[Maweya tirea]

Mary Sues?
What trap?

[Tengfya swizaw]

Referring to the common mistake of a lot of budding authors to use characters that are too convenient or perfect in some way. The problem of making a character that's too obviously manufactured and not believable.

[Maweya tirea]

Keep it up!

Referring to the common mistake of a lot of budding authors to use characters that are too convenient or perfect in some way. The problem of making a character that's too obviously manufactured and not believable.

Ok Irayo.

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

Another reminder to use the link at the top of the page to get to the story! Unless you're just reading though this to figure out what's been talked about here, then moving on the story.

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

Blah blah blah you know this already!

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

And this is how you wash, rinse, and repeat children.

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

And repeat a few more times.

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

DIVE BOMB! WEEEEEEEE -KXANGANGANG!-

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

Funny that the last place holder I made never got used, isn't it?

[Lehrrap Uniltìranyu]

[[place holder, one more, just in case!]]

[Schlipak]

OMG this is so great! Next part! ^^

[Sylwanin ean Tanhì]

Its really good but remember that the environment in Pandora is different than Earth's. Keep it in mind for future chapters. If you want more info on it, tell me!