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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #20 on: February 23, 2011, 07:22:03 pm »
Finally updated :D

Had most of this finished over a month ago but the chapter was too long so I split it in two - hopefully next update will come around sooner.
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #21 on: March 06, 2011, 07:31:45 pm »
More story please. :) This has got to be some of the greatest stuff.

One little thing about the latest chapter... it seems a little rushed. I suppose we need to get Grace to the moon already but the other chapters had more length to them so this one seems shorter.
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #22 on: March 06, 2011, 08:28:40 pm »
More story please. :) This has got to be some of the greatest stuff.

One little thing about the latest chapter... it seems a little rushed. I suppose we need to get Grace to the moon already but the other chapters had more length to them so this one seems shorter.

Actually wordcount is about the same but yeah.. this is why I split it and didnt post the chapter when I'd originally wrote it. Seemed too much. :P
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #23 on: March 07, 2011, 01:44:15 pm »
When will your next chapter be ready?
Neytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #24 on: March 07, 2011, 02:58:59 pm »
When will your next chapter be ready?

Probably not for a few weeks - Ive got finals coming up and that takes priority unfortunately :(
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #25 on: March 08, 2011, 07:17:08 am »
OMG each ch. keeps getting better and better. youv now just gotten me motivated to start working on my story again (blows dust off written material) lets hope my work exceeds to yours, eh?

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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #26 on: March 08, 2011, 10:57:25 am »
OMG each ch. keeps getting better and better. youv now just gotten me motivated to start working on my story again (blows dust off written material) lets hope my work exceeds to yours, eh?

Thanks!

And ACK! No competitions please o.o I become nasty and bad and I dont like being like that.

I do wish your story success though  :)
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #27 on: March 11, 2011, 10:47:47 am »
OMG each ch. keeps getting better and better. youv now just gotten me motivated to start working on my story again (blows dust off written material) lets hope my work exceeds to yours, eh?

Thanks!

And ACK! No competitions please o.o I become nasty and bad and I dont like being like that.

I do wish your story success though  :)

Its not a competition. I was working on long before you started yours. just ask around. the only reason it hasn't been viewed in a wile is because after summer vacation (last summer) my dedication ad writing style when out. i was able to get a ch. up, but then i went dark on the project. it honestly feels good to get back on it again.  :)

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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #28 on: April 01, 2011, 03:29:36 am »
Weee.. just uploaded a short chapter that acts as a divider between Earth and Pandora. (I swear this isnt a prank..I had most of it done about a week ago)

Will probably start this up again in Summer when I actually have time to work on it :3 hopefully will learn some more Na'vi by that point and will perhaps meet a few of you at the July 9th Meetup :3
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #29 on: April 01, 2011, 07:26:29 am »
Nice chapter, thank you for it!! Merci bien!
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #30 on: May 19, 2011, 06:19:02 pm »
~necropost~

I don't know what it is, but City of Paradise is beautifully written, and I absolutely love it! It has inspired me so much. Keep up the good work, ma 'eylan!
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #31 on: May 23, 2011, 12:39:55 pm »
~necropost~

I don't know what it is, but City of Paradise is beautifully written, and I absolutely love it! It has inspired me so much. Keep up the good work, ma 'eylan!

:) Irayo nìtxan! I am glad it is still being enjoyed ^^
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #32 on: July 02, 2011, 12:18:00 pm »
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #33 on: July 02, 2011, 12:18:27 pm »
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #34 on: July 02, 2011, 12:20:28 pm »
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D

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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #35 on: July 02, 2011, 12:44:29 pm »
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D
Yay! I'm glad; he was posting in my story thread and not comments and...ugh.
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #36 on: July 02, 2011, 01:23:52 pm »
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D
Yay! I'm glad; he was posting in my story thread and not comments and...ugh.

He defiled my poem thread.  >:(

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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #37 on: July 02, 2011, 02:29:16 pm »
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D
Yay! I'm glad; he was posting in my story thread and not comments and...ugh.

He defiled my poem thread.  >:(
>:( >:( >:( Why??? This is a happy website not a site for people to go trollin'!
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #38 on: July 02, 2011, 07:45:11 pm »
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D
Yay! I'm glad; he was posting in my story thread and not comments and...ugh.

He defiled my poem thread.  >:(
>:( >:( >:( Why??? This is a happy website not a site for people to go trollin'!

What a boring troll too.

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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #39 on: July 02, 2011, 08:14:09 pm »
Hrh, this is true
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