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Started by ToktorGrace, September 10, 2010, 11:51:37 PM

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ToktorGrace

Finally updated :D

Had most of this finished over a month ago but the chapter was too long so I split it in two - hopefully next update will come around sooner.
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

Txura Rolyu

More story please. :) This has got to be some of the greatest stuff.

One little thing about the latest chapter... it seems a little rushed. I suppose we need to get Grace to the moon already but the other chapters had more length to them so this one seems shorter.
Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

ToktorGrace

Quote from: Txura Rolyu on March 06, 2011, 07:31:45 PM
More story please. :) This has got to be some of the greatest stuff.

One little thing about the latest chapter... it seems a little rushed. I suppose we need to get Grace to the moon already but the other chapters had more length to them so this one seems shorter.

Actually wordcount is about the same but yeah.. this is why I split it and didnt post the chapter when I'd originally wrote it. Seemed too much. :P
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

Txura Rolyu

When will your next chapter be ready?
Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

ToktorGrace

Quote from: Txura Rolyu on March 07, 2011, 01:44:15 PM
When will your next chapter be ready?

Probably not for a few weeks - Ive got finals coming up and that takes priority unfortunately :(
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

OMG each ch. keeps getting better and better. youv now just gotten me motivated to start working on my story again (blows dust off written material) lets hope my work exceeds to yours, eh?

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ToktorGrace

Quote from: Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} on March 08, 2011, 07:17:08 AM
OMG each ch. keeps getting better and better. youv now just gotten me motivated to start working on my story again (blows dust off written material) lets hope my work exceeds to yours, eh?

Thanks!

And ACK! No competitions please o.o I become nasty and bad and I dont like being like that.

I do wish your story success though  :)
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

Quote from: Tìvawm'ia on March 08, 2011, 10:57:25 AM
Quote from: Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} on March 08, 2011, 07:17:08 AM
OMG each ch. keeps getting better and better. youv now just gotten me motivated to start working on my story again (blows dust off written material) lets hope my work exceeds to yours, eh?

Thanks!

And ACK! No competitions please o.o I become nasty and bad and I dont like being like that.

I do wish your story success though  :)

Its not a competition. I was working on long before you started yours. just ask around. the only reason it hasn't been viewed in a wile is because after summer vacation (last summer) my dedication ad writing style when out. i was able to get a ch. up, but then i went dark on the project. it honestly feels good to get back on it again.  :)

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ToktorGrace

Weee.. just uploaded a short chapter that acts as a divider between Earth and Pandora. (I swear this isnt a prank..I had most of it done about a week ago)

Will probably start this up again in Summer when I actually have time to work on it :3 hopefully will learn some more Na'vi by that point and will perhaps meet a few of you at the July 9th Meetup :3
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

Puvomun

Nice chapter, thank you for it!! Merci bien!
Krr a lì'fya lam sraw, may' frivìp utralit.

Ngopyu ayvurä.

Eana Ketuwong

~necropost~

I don't know what it is, but City of Paradise is beautifully written, and I absolutely love it! It has inspired me so much. Keep up the good work, ma 'eylan!
Tumbling hard until 3 AM on a Wednesday night

ToktorGrace

Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on May 19, 2011, 06:19:02 PM
~necropost~

I don't know what it is, but City of Paradise is beautifully written, and I absolutely love it! It has inspired me so much. Keep up the good work, ma 'eylan!

:) Irayo nìtxan! I am glad it is still being enjoyed ^^
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

Eana Ketuwong

Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?
Tumbling hard until 3 AM on a Wednesday night

wm.annis


Lolet


Eana Ketuwong

Quote from: Lolet te Maticay on July 02, 2011, 12:20:28 PM
Quote from: wm.annis on July 02, 2011, 12:18:27 PM
Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on July 02, 2011, 12:18:00 PM
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D
Yay! I'm glad; he was posting in my story thread and not comments and...ugh.
Tumbling hard until 3 AM on a Wednesday night

Lolet

Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on July 02, 2011, 12:44:29 PM
Quote from: Lolet te Maticay on July 02, 2011, 12:20:28 PM
Quote from: wm.annis on July 02, 2011, 12:18:27 PM
Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on July 02, 2011, 12:18:00 PM
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D
Yay! I'm glad; he was posting in my story thread and not comments and...ugh.

He defiled my poem thread.  >:(

Eana Ketuwong

Quote from: Lolet te Maticay on July 02, 2011, 01:23:52 PM
Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on July 02, 2011, 12:44:29 PM
Quote from: Lolet te Maticay on July 02, 2011, 12:20:28 PM
Quote from: wm.annis on July 02, 2011, 12:18:27 PM
Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on July 02, 2011, 12:18:00 PM
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D
Yay! I'm glad; he was posting in my story thread and not comments and...ugh.

He defiled my poem thread.  >:(
>:( >:( >:( Why??? This is a happy website not a site for people to go trollin'!
Tumbling hard until 3 AM on a Wednesday night

Lolet

Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on July 02, 2011, 02:29:16 PM
Quote from: Lolet te Maticay on July 02, 2011, 01:23:52 PM
Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on July 02, 2011, 12:44:29 PM
Quote from: Lolet te Maticay on July 02, 2011, 12:20:28 PM
Quote from: wm.annis on July 02, 2011, 12:18:27 PM
Quote from: Eana Ketuwong on July 02, 2011, 12:18:00 PM
Why is this kid posting "cool!" everywhere I go?

He's not any more.

IRAYO!  :D
Yay! I'm glad; he was posting in my story thread and not comments and...ugh.

He defiled my poem thread.  >:(
>:( >:( >:( Why??? This is a happy website not a site for people to go trollin'!

What a boring troll too.

Eana Ketuwong

Tumbling hard until 3 AM on a Wednesday night