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Offline ToktorGrace

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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #40 on: July 19, 2011, 11:33:43 pm »
Lol looks like it got my thread hijacked XD

an eye on this thread if you liked my story :) I'll be beginning on the next chapter tonight!!
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #41 on: July 31, 2011, 07:59:47 pm »
Update :)

hopefully I'll squeeze in anther chapter or two before school starts up again in September!  :D
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #42 on: August 01, 2011, 09:21:16 pm »
Please do. I enjoy your quality of writing very much.  :-* I good luck charm for you.  :D
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #43 on: August 02, 2011, 02:12:12 am »
this is a really good story, it really seems like Grace!  :) I can't wait for the next chapter! karma for you  ;D
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #44 on: June 29, 2012, 03:48:08 am »
Someone brought up that it's been nearly a year since I last updated :P I attribute this to the fact that I had pretty intense classes this past year and hardly much time at all for fun stuff like fanfiction.

I don't have a ton extra time as it stands right now, and most of this chapter was written before I got back to it tonight. This is why it is likely disjointed and pretty short. Hopefully the next chapter will be better (and take much less time!)

Edit: I also am sure my Na'vi is not correct :P If someone will tell me how it could be improved I would be most appreciative.
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #45 on: July 17, 2012, 06:23:16 pm »
This is a wonderful story. Very emotionally gripping. This, just like AVATAR, got me rather angry at the RDA and I realized something: if we discover Pandora and the "people" want to go there with avatar(s), this might happen. Tragedy might strike these People as aysawtute attempt to intervene, benevolent or not. So it's really a catch 22: as it is do we want to go there and befriend the (Na'vi) and risk AVATAR's "occurances", or do we want to leave them alone and risk our planet being destroyed, killing everyone with it? Those are the questions. Sad, but true. Great story though. ;D ;D
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Re: City of Paradise [Comment Area]
« Reply #46 on: December 20, 2012, 12:50:50 pm »
OMG i havent been able to read this story in a while

guess i got something to do on holiday vaca> :) good work with keeping up with this story girl i still love your writing style as always

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