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Started by ToktorGrace, September 10, 2010, 11:51:37 PM

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ToktorGrace

Lol looks like it got my thread hijacked XD

an eye on this thread if you liked my story :) I'll be beginning on the next chapter tonight!!
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

ToktorGrace

Update :)

hopefully I'll squeeze in anther chapter or two before school starts up again in September!  :D
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

Txura Rolyu

Please do. I enjoy your quality of writing very much.  :-* I good luck charm for you.  :D
Quote from: Ekirä on March 30, 2011, 04:45:34 PMNeytiri: Now you choose your woman. This you must feel inside. If she also chooses you, move quick like I showed.
Jake: How will I know if she chooses me?
Neytiri: She will try to kill you.
Jake: Outstanding. *takes out an ikran-catcher and walks through hometree looking for women*

Syulang

this is a really good story, it really seems like Grace!  :) I can't wait for the next chapter! karma for you  ;D
Oel ayngati kameie ma oeyä aysmukan sì aysmuke ulte Eywa ayngahu livu

munea kifkey, 'awa soaia

ToktorGrace

Someone brought up that it's been nearly a year since I last updated :P I attribute this to the fact that I had pretty intense classes this past year and hardly much time at all for fun stuff like fanfiction.

I don't have a ton extra time as it stands right now, and most of this chapter was written before I got back to it tonight. This is why it is likely disjointed and pretty short. Hopefully the next chapter will be better (and take much less time!)

Edit: I also am sure my Na'vi is not correct :P If someone will tell me how it could be improved I would be most appreciative.
Miracles are not contrary to nature, but only contrary to what we know about nature.  - St. Augustine

 



I speak Na'vi with a French accent...

Takmeyalan te Tsu'erak 'Ewfwefpìkxap'itan

This is a wonderful story. Very emotionally gripping. This, just like AVATAR, got me rather angry at the RDA and I realized something: if we discover Pandora and the "people" want to go there with avatar(s), this might happen. Tragedy might strike these People as aysawtute attempt to intervene, benevolent or not. So it's really a catch 22: as it is do we want to go there and befriend the (Na'vi) and risk AVATAR's "occurances", or do we want to leave them alone and risk our planet being destroyed, killing everyone with it? Those are the questions. Sad, but true. Great story though. ;D ;D
Pure white would be disturbing. :)
We don't make mistakes, we just have happy accidents.

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

OMG i havent been able to read this story in a while

guess i got something to do on holiday vaca> :) good work with keeping up with this story girl i still love your writing style as always

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