Danger on Pandora - Comments

[Tsamsiyu92]

A typo in

"Get too trigger happy"

I think you left out a "not".

[Txantslusam Skxawng]

Thanks for seeing that, I actually wanted to put don't before get

I have that sometimes when I'm typing a sentence and I have that sentence in my head but I forget one post. Like somewhere I told if everyone could move their posts into the Comments thread and after that I wanted to say, I don't want to bother a mod and when I posted it said, I want to bother a mod.

o_0 Lucky me because I don't think anyone noticed it. But now that chapter 5 is done, I can start with drawing Neytiri! Then next chapter probably will be up after a week or 8, I have some busy weeks coming ahead of me! I already got a name for the next chapter so when I get the time to write a bit, I can start right away from where I left off

!!!Warning: This spoiler contains the name of the next chapter, there is a change this name might be changed!!!

Spoiler

Chapter Six - Unintended Plans

[Swokéyan]

A pretty nice start i would read it!
And i think i know your name, but i wont tell them xD

[Niwantaw]

ITS DAVE!
(i doubt this very much)

[Txantslusam Skxawng]

HRH

You got one letter right, but in the wrong place.
My name is Thomas Bosch

[Txantslusam Skxawng]

I haven't had any time to write. I still only have the chapter name of chapter 6