Downfall - an Avatar prequel (COMMENT THREAD)

Started by Irtaviš Ačankif, October 23, 2011, 09:07:02 PM

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Irtaviš Ačankif

Previously Ithisa Kīranem, Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng.

Name from my Sakaš conlang, from Sakasul Ältäbisäl Acarankïp

"First name" is Ačankif, not Eltabiš! In Na'vi, Atsankip.

Irtaviš Ačankif

Previously Ithisa Kīranem, Uniltìrantokx te Skxawng.

Name from my Sakaš conlang, from Sakasul Ältäbisäl Acarankïp

"First name" is Ačankif, not Eltabiš! In Na'vi, Atsankip.

Lolet

I like it!  ;D It's a new angle and it souds really interesting.

The only problem I had was that you used so much fancy vocabulary that I had trouble reading. Maybe that's just me. Btu you could probably go through and make it a little less wordy. But still, it's a great idea for a story.  :D

Kamean

Tse'a ngal ke'ut a krr fra'uti kame.