Dreamwalker's dilema {comments}

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Kätsyín te Zotxekay Tsyal’itan

Quote from: Tawtute akawng on April 07, 2010, 04:17:49 PM
story intro eventually ripped from
life on mars.



i knew i had seen something like this before

Relax, its not like James himself didn't take a few liberties from earlier movies, namely Abyss and Alien.
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LearnNavi Forums:
"It's not an addiction...I just need it everyday."

Yeya Swizaw

Man, that's a good story  :o

Now I can't wait for the next chapter. You're mean :(

"Everybody loves me... except people who don't"
  "Oe yawne lu frapor... oe ke lu suteru mungwrr"

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

yes in real life im the nicest guy you can meet
but in my books i like to teese the readers a little ;) ;D

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Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

CH. 4 is now up for reading! enjoy!

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Hawnuyu atxen

QuoteNow I can't wait for the next chapter. You're mean Sad
Quotebut in my books i like to teese the readers a little Wink Grin

...This isn't a little teasing... it's teasing in the size of Polyphemus ;)
(and if that wasn't clear enough, than i'll say it clearly too: this story is nìtxan sìltsan)
"Hrrap rä'ä si olo'ur smuktuä." ; "Ke'u ke lu ngay. Frakemit tung." (Assassin's Creed)

Nikre tsa'usìn!

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

Thank you. I hope you enjoy the next 26 chapters that I write...that is if my hands dont kill me first! ;D

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Hawnuyu atxen

I usually enjoy fanfics, so that isn't the problem here... it is the waiting for the next one ;)
"Hrrap rä'ä si olo'ur smuktuä." ; "Ke'u ke lu ngay. Frakemit tung." (Assassin's Creed)

Nikre tsa'usìn!

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

a warning before you guys get upset: some of the CH. i've written, (CH. 7 for fair warning) will take longer then a week to get done because of my spacific scedual. therefor those spacific CH. will take at least 2 weeks at min. to finish because of their lengthyness.

don't worry. this weeks Ch. will get in by sometime this sun. and i'll have al April vacation to work on the others.

(and a note to swoka ikran: sorry if the minor changes you gave me haven't been put in. i only get a hour or so on the comp. at school, the library, and home when not typing. i would need longer then that time to make changes but don't get to pissy. i'm going to a sleepover tonight for 2 of my friends birthdays so i'll get it done then.)

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Kätsyín te Zotxekay Tsyal’itan

Quote from: Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} on April 16, 2010, 07:46:11 AM
a warning before you guys get upset: some of the CH. i've written, (CH. 7 for fair warning) will take longer then a week to get done because of my spacific scedual. therefor those spacific CH. will take at least 2 weeks at min. to finish because of their lengthyness.

don't worry. this weeks Ch. will get in by sometime this sun. and i'll have al April vacation to work on the others.

(and a note to swoka ikran: sorry if the minor changes you gave me haven't been put in. i only get a hour or so on the comp. at school, the library, and home when not typing. i would need longer then that time to make changes but don't get to pissy. i'm going to a sleepover tonight for 2 of my friends birthdays so i'll get it done then.)

If its as good as the rest of your chapters, I'll be satified no matter how long it takes.
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LearnNavi Forums:
"It's not an addiction...I just need it everyday."

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

don't worry...all i have to say is that sometimes i surprize myself :P ::)

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Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

alright, CH. 5 is up for reading. sorry it took another day to do. we had dinner out yesterday and mom wouldn't give me enough time to finish it.  :P

(and to swoka ikran: you can help on the CH. if you like.)

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Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

#31
Sorry i did not get my CH. in this weekend. been busy. that and mom has been bugging me about it a lot. I will have it up by tonight, hopefully.

EDIT: once again, comments are welcome, good or bad. tell me what you thought of the book so far and what you think i should change!

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Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

i was right: i got the chapter up at the time i said it would. CH. 6 is now up for reading! ;D

and once again, to those of you who haden't seen earlier posts, the next CH., along with other future CH.s, will take at least 2 weeks to complete because of there length. be patient, ant they will come soon enough.

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Niwantaw

........

my patience wears thin :D
*uses jedi mind trick*
"you will finish it sooner..." :D
Only mostly AWOL.

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

its not my fault that some chapters are longer...well it is, but you get what i mean. i'm a slow typer, thats just me.

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Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

started writing: march 7
ended: may 6

started typing: march 21
ended: ???

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Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

finally. CH. 7 is up for grabs (took me long enough) hope you all enjoy it, and comment if you like.

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Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}

It has come to my attention that writing is basiclly my new passion. nothing other then gaming keeps me happy. theirfor i am happy to announce to all that like my book so far that I am not ending Ash's adventures in Dreamwalker's Dilema.

You heard right. there is going to be not 1 but 2 more books for this epic adventure! a trilogy of pure awsomeness. I'm officially calling it The Dreamwalker Chronicles. book two is in progress as we speak. so, if you loved the first 7 chapters, expect there to be more. lots more.

and if your praising this post right now, your so very welcome. If not...well, go stick your head in a tree or something.

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Niwantaw

*attempts to put head into tree*

*fails*

end score
Tree - 1
tawtute - 0
Only mostly AWOL.

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}


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