Eywa's thief

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Note!-this is filled with some navi words, so you should ftia (yes that's navi!) some navi words first! (Or use the glossary below the story.).this is also ment to be beginner friendly,so i hope it does!

This is my first fanfic, so I hope you enjoy this first chapter! This story is based on some posts that made me do this.
Chapter one-my life so far
Kaltxì tawtute puk! (Several years before jakesully came)


Hmm, this is my first time I san by lì'u.I found this puk when I scouting for any tawtute roaming around our home tree.luckliy, I went to grace's school when I was an 'evi and learnt some of the tawtute language. I found the puk to be intact, and have a lot of empty space except with all this tawtute 'ìngl ìsì  talking about these weird things like a giant metal -skinned "dragoen" and demons living among us.(sorry, my 'ìngl ìsì is quite rusty since I was an 'evi! )
When I came back to the tribe, many tribe members were quite curious of my "artifact "and I was given the usual strange look from everybody. And now, I should have told nga about myself. First off, my name's oe krrnekx hrrap, but my real name is oe munge hrrap(author-yes,I should change my name!) and also Aketuan for short. My sa'atenuk and sempul were great hunters, who were killed when the tawtutes appeared in the past and attacked us when I was just a prrnen. I was soon given to my guardians, Nakaryu and Tarya.Latter; I work as a aprentice with Nakaryu, my guardian, who has an unusual way of living. Well, you see, Nakaryu isn't a normal tute unlike any other Navi. He has developed a "second ronsem", meaning he is more smarter and open-minded than an average navi.he can tell when a tawtute is coming 145 stone throws away! But he is quite bad at combat. He is the most smartest and sneaky of all navi I ever known(besides the olo'eyktan and elders). In fact, he is a master thief! No, he doesn't steal any poor navi's property; he raids and takes any tawtute objects silently and quickly. Nakaryu then sells or examine his loot is at his secret lair in a secret tree near Home tree. Many people appreciate Nakaryu's artifacts and wisdom from our kxu, while sometimes; some skxawng would say that he is a coward and weak in the enemies' sight.how dare they argue to a great navi! I'm very lucky i am Nakaryu's apprentice, he taught me and shared with me many things he life we can use to do things. He also brought me once in a looting expedition (sorry, i'm not allowed to talk about it,beacuse if any tawtute finds this,they will for sure know our existance and spoil our living!) he taught me the ways of a thief,and what not to steal from.He said someday, I will become like him. Some kids feel jealous of my apprenticeship, but they ask me every time how is it being Nakaryu's aprentice.Tarya on the other hand is quite a singer,and sometimes teaches children how to sing.She first met Nakaryu on his first looting mission(which failed when she blown his cover!)Tarya is also one of the ikran riders in our tribe.but right now,it's getting late,and Tarya says to sleep now.hopefully,i can explain more tomorrow or later.if you want a picture of me,then it's on top near the title(author-hehehe!yes!I'm him!)
oe krrnekx hrrap/Aketuan,aged 14 yrs(in tawtute time)

ikran-moutain banshee(i want one!)
skxawng-moron!
Tawtute-human/sky person
San-quote,say
Lì'u – word
Nga-you(yes,you reader!)
Ìngl ìsì-English
Sa'atenuk-mother
Sempul-father
Prrnen-baby
Book = puk(thanks muzer!)
TUTE-PERSON
ronsem-mind
Kxu-enemy!
olo'eyktan-clan leader
I will be making some more chapters! ;) ;) ;) ;)

guest6785

hi!Sorry for the short beginning chapter above!This one's more longer now with 2 parts!

Chapter two-two big surprises part 1
Kaltxì tawtute puk! (still several years before jakesully came)

sorry for not writing lately!It's because of Nakaryu.He's lately more agitated with training,and ramped up some more time for it.Now,it feels like a burden on me.But what could Nakaryu could have changed this?It was fine doing it at Kxamtrrmaw,but now,it's both Kxamtrrmaw and kxamtrr!sometimes,I ask him what's it all about,but he refuses to tell and continues on with learning.tawtute puk,would you like to hear about my training experince?well,it starts with me coming to Nakaryu's secret tree hideout,which is just near the thunder rocks(hallejuahya what -ever mountains),then entering the storage area to suit up,wearing standard thief's clothes,consisting of vawm shoulder pads,l arm pads and tough lioncloths,with light re'o-gear,brown buckles and pocket belts and some stolen tawtute equipment which assist  in different ways.(like this object that lets us see in the night)Soon I have to do laps,running natural training courses and doing streches around his hideout,added with tawtute technology studies,oral learning, tawtute weapons demostrations,sneaking skills,learnt skills course and protective tactics,all in a day at training.it really aches after one tawtute hour of training(reminds me of taliban training,though it really isn't related ;) :D).And the kids say that being a thief is cool and exciting,but they have not seen this.Tarya says it just part of training,and I should come over it,as it's the hardest part of being a thief's apprentice.yeah it does seem txa',but I feel like it's just the begining of something big.Right now something's stirring around the tribe.Some people are paying more attention to me,even the olo'eyktan's daughter neytiri.And a few people are wishing me luck in the Big steal.What Big steal?they never tell me these days.I tried asking the spiritual elder,but she tells me to be patient and I will see it.Yeeesh,some people are in some kind of trick-Aketuan-to-make-him-confuse game!Anyway,it does feel good that more navi pay attention to our livelyhood,as it is a hard skill to master.nobody can copy our skills,as only the master thief knows the ways of a thief and only he/she teaches people who are worthy of becoming one.(author-kinda like a jedi!)A thief always have the sense of his enemies,knowing when they are to strike and move,and that's how I got chosen to become one.when I was about a kid in numtseng, i had thid uncanny sense to know when teacher grace is about to write a sentence,behind my back!Soon,Nakaryu noticed it,and tested me.I faced when a swizaw is going to hit a string,know a when creature is following  behind me,predict when blows and attacks are going to happen.Nakaryu was quite amazed at my abilities,and fully accepted me as a apprentice of the master thief.*Neytiri walks to Aketuan who's lying down writing this.Aketuan looks up at neytiri,"Kaltxì neytiri!I find that you are wanting me?"neytiri answers,"yes,my sempul and the tribal elders  are wanting you to meet them,they have this important ..."Big steal"for you.Aketuan-"okay thanks i just need to fininsh this".Neytiri-"urrr..,okay,just fininsh whaterver your doing with that tawtute thing."walks away from aketuan.*

Man,that neytiri is beatiful!
finally!my prayers to ewya are answered!now I get to know what's going on in the village.anyway,guess I have to see the olo'eyktan and the elders.

oe krrnekx hrrap/Aketuan,aged 14.9 yrs(in tawtute time)
yay! next to my tawtute time birthday!


Tawtute-sky person
Puk-book
Kxamtrrmaw-the time immediately after noon, early afternoon
Kxamtrr-before noon
txa'-hard
vawm-dark
re'o-head
olo'eyktan-tribal leader
skxawng-moron!
Numtseng-school
Sempul-father


guest6785

here's a little something for the story!
my future story item!