Fanfiction feedback friend?

Muzer · October 26, 2010, 05:19:32 PM

Wow, love that chapter - the balance is perfect! I especially love the little extra couple of paragraphs at the end - just when you think everything interesting has finished, suddenly a little extra titbit comes along that's incredibly interesting and just leaves me wanting to read more

Amaya · October 26, 2010, 05:36:36 PM

hehe thanks!

and Muzer, glad you liked that bit I threw in at the end. I'd actually been planning another bit after that, but I decided after it was written that it was by far a better ending for the chapter, so that bit got moved to the next chapter.

Writing, it's all about drawing the reader in, kefyak?

The next chapter actually should be up some time this evening, now that I'm awake from my morning nap and fed. It's 3/4 written, just the final four scenes to finish up!

Ekirä · October 26, 2010, 10:10:53 PM

Finally got around to reading the chapter--excellent! Would love to see another one up tonight...

Amaya · October 27, 2010, 12:42:12 AM

And it's up! I know, blowing all your minds, aren't I? I'm blowing my own as well

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} · October 27, 2010, 07:01:56 PM

it blew all right, it blew....

Amaya · October 30, 2010, 12:09:24 PM

Watch out, it's about to get blown even more...next chapter is up, and it's a hot one! So those innocent young things who read my fic might want to avert their eyes at certain points!

Ekirä · October 30, 2010, 03:19:17 PM

Quote from: Amaya on October 30, 2010, 12:09:24 PM
Watch out, it's about to get blown even more...next chapter is up, and it's a hot one! So those innocent young things who read my fic might want to avert their eyes at certain points!

It's moving along nicely!!

And three chapters in what....5 days? It's almost like you're trying to finish Brotherhood before NaNo starts.

Amaya · October 30, 2010, 04:52:36 PM

LOL Finish, no, I'm not that ambitious, but get to the fall of Hometree? That's achievable, and fits in well with my NaNo, "Histories"

Amaya · November 01, 2010, 02:39:56 AM

Wheee! Chapter 29 is up just before midnight! I'm still planning to try and get chapter 30 up in the next couple of days too, to really get through to my starting point for Histories

Ekirä · November 01, 2010, 08:26:54 PM

Woohoo another one!

I bet chapter 30 is going to be painful though.......

Amaya · November 06, 2010, 05:55:27 AM

Yes, ma Ekirä you would guess right. It's up, now, and purged from my heart so I can go back to Histories and enjoy its much more lighthearted air for a little while, until I feel ready to tackle 31.

Amaya · November 12, 2010, 04:00:13 AM

Next chapter is up, with answers to almost all the burning questions the last chapter left you all with (I'm assuming)

I've also been working on Histories and will update it on here soon, perhaps tomorrow or Saturday!

Muzer · November 12, 2010, 10:19:28 AM

We also have a very good remembrance day, FWIW (UK).

Amaya · November 12, 2010, 10:21:44 AM

Yup, yours is the only other "good" one as far as I'm concerned

Plus you have white poppies, which I think are more than awesome, so...

Muzer · November 12, 2010, 11:03:38 AM

White poppies? Nope, they're red

And I just finished reading your latest chapter - again, outstanding. Well-balanced against the previous chapter, as well as within itself.

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} · November 12, 2010, 12:28:55 PM

excellent CH! You should ask JC if you could write the first movie into a novel for him so he could concentrate on making the second. I think next to Bionic arms on Pandora, yours is one of the best stories on the site. Love the writing style.

Muzer · November 23, 2010, 05:05:26 PM

I'm not normally one to hassle people but I'm really in suspense on what's going to happen and have been that way for a while... how's the next chapter coming along?

Sorry for being rude like this, but I want to read it so much

Amaya · November 23, 2010, 06:40:48 PM

hehe no worries, it's about 2/3 done although I'm behind on my NaNo...gonna be blitzing both over the next week to finish, but the chapter comes first because I have to get it out of my head, so...next couple of days?

glad you're enjoying it!

Ekirä · November 23, 2010, 06:53:21 PM

Quote from: Amaya on November 23, 2010, 06:40:48 PM
hehe no worries, it's about 2/3 done although I'm behind on my NaNo...gonna be blitzing both over the next week to finish, but the chapter comes first because I have to get it out of my head, so...next couple of days?

glad you're enjoying it!

Good to know you haven't given up on NaNo.... I was starting to wonder.

Have fun blitzing!!!

Amaya · November 23, 2010, 07:55:11 PM

LOL naw this is my typical. I finished one year doing 30k words in the last two days, so...