Fanfiction feedback friend?

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

i dont see a problem with it either.

[Muzer]

What happened to this? It's a great fanfic!

[Amaya]

my practicum at the hospital happened.  Fear not, I'm working on the next chapter as we speak!

[Muzer]

Ah, great!

You'll definitely get karma for this one when you finish.

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

that depends on how fast this guy does it. not that i cant wait, its just this thing is closest to some other fan fics that sound and look like novels.

[Amaya]

Ahem... *looks down at chest* *raises eyebrow* *looks back up*  Well that's a new one...  I haven't been called a guy before...  *checks down pants*  Nope, definitely not a guy 

I have good news for all of you.  The next chapter should be up within the next couple of hours 

[Niwantaw]

duma i am afraid to say that

THOU HAST FAILED

[Muzer]

That's why Na'vi > English - just use po and tute and keep it neutral ;p

[Amaya]

*sounds the trumpets*  Chapter is out!  Go fill your boots everyone!



>.> and it even has stuff with Jake and Neytiri.  I've discovered that Jake is a rather reluctant muse, but Neytiri's more than willing to share her thoughts with me, and they're...interesting.

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

when i me guy, i mean a person, dont really relate to either boy or girl

i do it to everyone

[Niwantaw]

when i me guy, i mean a person, dont really relate to either boy or girl

i do it to everyone

/failed attempt to cover it up

[Kätsyín te Zotxekay Tsyal’itan]

duma i am afraid to say that

THOU HAST FAILED

LOL, what would your failness like today? LOL. Kidding.

[Muzer]

Anyway, outstanding work, as ever.

[Kätsyín te Zotxekay Tsyal’itan]

Anyway, outstanding work, as ever.

Yup, sorry I didn't say that in my first post. Great job.

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

are you sure there is a new CH.? cause i checked and its still at 'the night after'.

[Muzer]

Clear your cache - the new chapter is called "Moments in Time"

(And also, it's "The Morning After").

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

"oops" 

[Tsamsiyu92]

I don't care about the fact that im bumping your thread, but I love your storytelling. I have read 7 chapters today, still reading. Your chapters end very good, makes me want to read the next instantly.

Keep it up:)

[Tsamsiyu92]

HRH @ Takakaka (what she called Taka once).

I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

[Amaya]

*waves* hello all!  I live!  My apologies for taking so long at it but the iknimaya scene has been kicking my txim for the last couple of weeks.  I had to watch it over and over and over (not that I minded that really  ) to be sure that I had all the details down.  I'm a bit anal that way which is why I try to avoid duplicating movie scenes.  Nothing is more distracting and annoying than reading a fanfic where they try to follow the original story but get little bits of things like dialogue wrong.

The chapter isn't posted yet, I'm exhausted and passing out now, but when I wake in 8 hours or so I'll give it one last read-through to make sure everything is coherent, write up the vocab explanations and post it.  I'll make another note in here once it's actually up too, so you don't have to keep checking for it   

I can't wait to hear everyone's reaction to the last scene of this chapter! *bounces* It's a theory I've been running over and over in my head for at least the last couple months ever since I got my DVD and managed to get a really good look at the door of Trudy's Sampson.  Which is all I'm going to say about that, you're just going to have to read the chapter if you want to know what I'm going on about.

See you all soon!