Fanfiction feedback friend?

Amaya · July 19, 2010, 01:54:24 AM

I live!

The next chapter is almost ready to be posted, just needs a read-over in the morning when my sanity is somewhat more evident. I'd hoped to get it out before I went halfway across the country for my brother's wedding but somehow wedding-prep-stuff got first priority

dunno why that could be...

Anyway, look forward to a little note in here once it's up tomorrow!

Tsamsiyu92 · July 19, 2010, 05:17:48 AM

Nice to see that it is not only me and Archaic that are somewhat active these days. Can't wait for next chapter.

Amaya · July 19, 2010, 01:33:11 PM

Tada! Yup, the chapter is up! Full of cultural goodies from me...hey I have to put my education to some kind of use! But (I hope) enjoyable as well.

Enjoy, all!

Niwantaw · July 19, 2010, 03:50:35 PM

Quote from: Tsamsiyu92 on July 19, 2010, 05:17:48 AM
Nice to see that it is not only me and Archaic that are somewhat active these days. Can't wait for next chapter.

I'm trying I just don't get much time to write... and I've kinda misplaced my plot...

ahhh well...

OT: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!

Tsamsiyu92 · July 19, 2010, 04:22:48 PM

I liked your new chapter. Keep up the good work!

You misspelled 'eveng, and be careful when compounding words, only Frommer has done that. the ...-'eveng is no grammar rule (yet, or is it?)

"...-yä 'eveng"

Muzer · July 19, 2010, 05:06:02 PM

Also, it should be aysoktor - t lenits to s, and ay+ causes lenition.

Amaya · July 19, 2010, 05:33:32 PM

argh, good catch. I must've been half asleep, I'm pretty sure I had that right in previous chapters...

Just checked. Yup, it was only this time. And I also didn't misspell 'eveng, I mistranslated. I meant to use 'ewan, which is "young". Just fixed both of those.

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} · July 20, 2010, 12:40:41 PM

love the new chapter! seeing jake and tom all strung out was really entertaning

Amaya · August 06, 2010, 10:21:48 PM

Woot! New chapter! Go enjoy, everyone.

Muzer · August 07, 2010, 03:11:55 AM

* Muzer hacks at his mobile ISP repeatedly with a sharp axe.

It turns out that for some odd reason they filter ff.net to those without a credit card... time to enable Opera Turbo! Best way of getting around filters ever

Amaya · August 07, 2010, 03:13:58 AM

Quote from: Muzer on August 07, 2010, 03:11:55 AM
* Muzer hacks at his mobile ISP repeatedly with a sharp axe.

It turns out that for some odd reason they filter ff.net to those without a credit card... time to enable Opera Turbo! Best way of getting around filters ever

Wow. That's just...wow, so wrong!

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} · August 21, 2010, 04:15:38 PM

when is there going to be a new chapter?

Amaya · August 21, 2010, 04:17:37 PM

soon I hope, I've been struggling with insomnia which is sapping my creative energies along with everything else, but the chapter is plotted out just have to get Jake to cooperate. Or rather, I'm working on a very "action-oriented" scene and I have to twist my mind around just exactly what he's doing. Hopefully by the end of the weekend it'll be ready.

Amaya · August 26, 2010, 07:14:20 AM

and the chapter is here! Go enjoy, everyone!

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} · August 31, 2010, 12:16:47 PM

fing great chapter! keep it up!

Muzer · September 01, 2010, 06:55:24 PM

Yes, another fantastic chapter! I'm really wondering what is going to happen exactly after this...

Amaya · September 02, 2010, 06:53:01 AM

Well, now you get to find out!

next chapter just posted!

Ekirä · September 02, 2010, 10:21:33 AM

Finally.

It's great, as always. Can't wait to read more about the Sully boys' adventures and mishaps.

Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä} · September 02, 2010, 02:35:58 PM

yeay chapter!

Muzer · September 02, 2010, 07:42:11 PM

Quote from: Amaya on September 02, 2010, 06:53:01 AM
Well, now you get to find out! next chapter just posted!

I was referring more to the long term (that's not saying I want you to rush ahead, I like the pace it's going at), but it's always great to have a new chapter!