Fanfiction feedback friend?

[Amaya]

Not sure if this is the right place to post this or not but I figured I'll throw it out there and if it isn't I'll be corrected.

I'm working on a fanfic, quite enjoy it really, but the hard part is none of the friends I usually share my fanfic with for feedback/crazy "omgIcan'tbelievemymusesjustdidthat" stuff are into Avatar.  I'm...really missing the interaction with like-minded people.  I don't need a beta, coherency and grammar have never been issues with me, but I need a...well, a sounding board, I guess.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5742845/1/Brotherhood

That's the fanfic so far, in case anyone wants to read it.  People seem to be enjoying it but ff.net isn't exactly the most interactive of sites as far as making actual connections between readers and authors.

Anyone want to help me? Rutxe?

[Niwantaw]

its looking good from what i have read

read up to ch 3/4 can't remember which but yeah looking good

[Na'vi Kxanìa Taronyu]

I've read up to chapter 7 and am very pleased.  I can say without a doubt this story has a LOAD of potential.  I love the fact you have BOTH of the Sully brothers!  But this has some nice romance parts and especially getting creative with the ranks is something I find to be great.  10/10 rating so far!

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

gotten to 2, looks like a novel, and it has something that i dont, but can't tell

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

still loving the story. on 7 right know

[Amaya]

  Glad some of you out there are enjoying this!  Yes, it isn't short, and the chapters aren't tiny either, but that's the way I prefer to write.

>.> I have to say, Avatar muses are...interesting.  Especially the Na'vi.  They don't chatter the same way my usual muses do, but when they want something they're VERY INSISTANT

Hoping to get chapter 14 posted sometime tonight before practcum eats me...

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

please get it done. other then my book, bionic arms on pandora, and child of two species, your book is VERY ADDICTING!

[Kätsyín te Zotxekay Tsyal’itan]

All these fan fic books seem to have one thing in common...THEY ARE ALL AWESOME!!!

Great job, read up to Ch3 and I'm already very impressed.

[Muzer]

Argh, they're all so awesome! Can't wait for this one's next chapter!


To be quite honest, if they'd kept Tom alive and incorporated some or all of this into the film (obviously making it longer, but still...), it would have made it much more interesting! Though it'd probably put the age rating up a bit



EDIT: Damn, I REALLY love this one. You're definitely getting karma - can't wait for chapter 14!

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

you should post when you put up new CH, cause i had no idea it was up until i checked, (and as always it was good)

[Muzer]

Wow, brilliant new chapter, I really love this one!

Yes, I agree with Duma Vadamee; please post in this thread when you make a new chapter so that we know to look!

[Amaya]

  alright, I'll try and remember to do that!  Actually meant to but practicum eats the brain...

[Duma Vadamee {Aungia Tsawkeyä}]

also off topic...um, Muzer. you should eventually get a pic. some people, (including myself), tend to go by peoples pic. rather then names. just seems easier to me, at least, (although who could forget a name like Muzer?)

[Muzer]

I very rarely use Avatars, got too lazy to find and select the image on each forum - though since you asked, I'll route (root? I never know which word to use in this expression) out the Worms-themed one someone made for me yonks ago...

[Niwantaw]

that sounds epic!


back to topic:
looking good!

[Muzer]

Done


EDIT: Ugh, it scaled the image to a horrible resolution. Hope you don't mind animated GIF avatars on this forum either...

[Niwantaw]

that is awesome.....

[Ikranä mokri]

the retroness is cool XD

[‘Eylan hufweyä]

I must admit that i did not yet read your story, but i can only agree with that opinion: The most important thing at writing a fanfiction story is having fun at writing. I personally had it and i think the fun is the key to success.


Maybe my english is not the best, i apologize for that. 

[Niwantaw]

nothing wrong with your English that i can see