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Offline Muntxa

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JakexNeytiri oneshot: I'm waiting
« on: January 21, 2010, 08:15:36 am »
This is my first oneshot for Avatar. It's about my favorite couple; Jake and Neytiri. The story is quite short, but I hope you'll like it! Please review!  :D

I do not own: "Avatar", it's by James Cameron.


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I'm not myself anymore.

I'm not there anymore.

I'm lying here and waiting for you.

Neytiri.

I'm waiting for you, Neytiri, waiting for my new home, Pandora, for my new family. Waiting to have this beautiful skin and waiting to see it every day. To see you every day. It's not easy to wait. Since I have the ability to run back, I couldn't stand still. But you're worth it.

I'm not myself anymore because now, I'll be yours.

I'm not there anymore because I'm here now.

I open my eyes and there's your face.

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Re: JakexNeytiri oneshot: I'm waiting
« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2010, 08:38:05 am »
Aww, that's so cute! :)

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Re: JakexNeytiri oneshot: I'm waiting
« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2010, 09:45:42 am »
Looks good. Also, nobody thought you owned Avatar in the first place ;) hehe. Eywa ngahu.
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Re: JakexNeytiri oneshot: I'm waiting
« Reply #3 on: January 21, 2010, 01:31:59 pm »
Thank you both very much, I'm glad you liked it ^_-

"Also, nobody thought you owned Avatar in the first place  hehe"

Yeah, it's because I'm used to post my FFs on ff.net... lol

 

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