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Liri'el's Story (Vur Liri'elä) - Comments
« on: August 17, 2012, 10:16:13 pm »
I am attempting to write a fänfìk from the point of view of a Na'vi woman, in her own words, which would be entirely translatable into Na'vi.  All dialog which takes place in Na'vi will be italicized, and you may see it here.  Also please forgive my poor artistic skills. :)


So, comments?
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Re: Liri'el's Story (Vur Liri'elä) - Comments
« Reply #1 on: August 18, 2012, 03:12:42 pm »
Good idea to publish also English version, it will be really helpful (even for me, sometimes :))
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« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2012, 11:58:26 pm »
I'm happy to say that my third installment is now finished. :D
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« Reply #3 on: September 18, 2012, 07:38:16 pm »
Part four is done now, and even under the time limit for the "are you sure you want to post in this topic?" message!  Wow!
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« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2012, 12:37:23 am »
I'm not so successful with my Ralu's story  :(  So it is time to start part five :)
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Re: Liri'el's Story (Vur Liri'elä) - Comments
« Reply #5 on: October 09, 2012, 10:57:36 am »
Sorry that it's been a while.  I've finished more of part 5, but I still have a third of it left to post. :)
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« Reply #6 on: October 18, 2012, 07:05:02 am »
Part 5 is now finished, but if you want to know why I put a picture of an atokirina' at the top, you'll have to stick with me until Part 6 (I didn't cover as much as I had planned to in part 5). ;)
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« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2012, 10:38:40 pm »
Again, it's been long enough since I updated my story that I get the red "this topic has not been posted in..." warning.  But more of Part 6 is finished (pending Blue Elf's corrections of my inevitable mistakes in the Na'vi version). ;D
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« Reply #8 on: November 23, 2012, 12:50:14 pm »
Well, I was wondering, whether story will continue. Nice to know it will.
And I see you use your old profile picture again :) I nearly forgot you used it before....
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« Reply #9 on: December 04, 2012, 03:51:18 pm »
Well, part 6 is finished, and I have part 7 all written, but not yet translated into English.  Despite the seasonal busy-ness, I hope to have that completely done before the end of December.  Thank you for your patience. :)
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Re: Liri'el's Story (Vur Liri'elä) - Comments
« Reply #10 on: December 13, 2012, 12:16:19 am »
Ma Alyara!  How cruel you are to make us wait so long for your story!
 8)
 :D
But I thoroughly enjoy your style and the perspective of a Na'vi woman is wonderful!
Ateyo te Syaksyuk
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« Reply #11 on: December 13, 2012, 01:27:42 am »
Irayo nìtxan nang! :D  And think of it as "suspenseful" instead of cruel. ;)  Or what it actually is, which is forgetful and easily distracted. :-[  Also, I very much appreciate the feedback! :)
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« Reply #12 on: December 13, 2012, 09:42:01 am »
You are not cruel!  I am being melodramatic! 
But don't be so forgetful and distracted!
Your adoring public awaits!
You are a good story teller and I look forward to the next episode!
ta ATEYO
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« Reply #13 on: December 13, 2012, 02:51:04 pm »
Thank you, thank you, O my adoring public! :-*  I know that you wouldn't call me truly cruel.
It is I who am being melodramatic now, but, honestly, it is all about bringing joy to people. :D
Myself included; writing is fun! :)  Off to do some more of it now...
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« Reply #14 on: December 15, 2012, 10:15:11 pm »
WE AWAIT YOUR STORY!
(meanwhile I have incorporated Liei'el into my story, nìteng!!!)
ta ATEYO
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« Reply #15 on: December 28, 2012, 04:57:17 pm »
I have part 7 all written, AND NOW translated into English.  Despite the seasonal busy-ness, I DID have that completely done before the end of December.  Thank you for your patience. :)
Also, stay tuned: new year=new hapxìtsyìp! :)
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« Reply #16 on: February 17, 2013, 07:57:19 pm »
Up to part 9 now, although I was very sluggish for a time, there...  Anyway, it's going faster now. :)
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« Reply #17 on: March 22, 2013, 12:47:54 am »
Does anyone think I should continue this? :(
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Re: Liri'el's Story (Vur Liri'elä) - Comments
« Reply #18 on: March 22, 2013, 03:23:09 am »
Are you in doubts? But I understand it, forum is quiet now with very low activity, unfortunately (and I 'm wondering if it change in short time - honestly, I don't hope so).
I'd like to read new parts, if they come, but you must decide if one reader is enough :) Of course you can write just for your pleasure - I do that on my blog. Just two or three post per month to not loose language knowledge.
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Re: Liri'el's Story (Vur Liri'elä) - Comments
« Reply #19 on: March 22, 2013, 05:18:37 am »
Irayo, ma oeyä 'eylan.  :D:-*:D

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