Liri'el's Story (Vur Liri'elä) - Comments

Started by Alyara Arati, August 17, 2012, 10:16:13 PM

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Alyara Arati

I am attempting to write a fänfìk from the point of view of a Na'vi woman, in her own words, which would be entirely translatable into Na'vi.  All dialog which takes place in Na'vi will be italicized, and you may see it here.  Also please forgive my poor artistic skills. :)


So, comments?
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Good idea to publish also English version, it will be really helpful (even for me, sometimes :))
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

I'm happy to say that my third installment is now finished. :D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Alyara Arati

Part four is done now, and even under the time limit for the "are you sure you want to post in this topic?" message!  Wow!
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

I'm not so successful with my Ralu's story  :(  So it is time to start part five :)
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Sorry that it's been a while.  I've finished more of part 5, but I still have a third of it left to post. :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Alyara Arati

Part 5 is now finished, but if you want to know why I put a picture of an atokirina' at the top, you'll have to stick with me until Part 6 (I didn't cover as much as I had planned to in part 5). ;)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Alyara Arati

Again, it's been long enough since I updated my story that I get the red "this topic has not been posted in..." warning.  But more of Part 6 is finished (pending Blue Elf's corrections of my inevitable mistakes in the Na'vi version). ;D
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Well, I was wondering, whether story will continue. Nice to know it will.
And I see you use your old profile picture again :) I nearly forgot you used it before....
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Well, part 6 is finished, and I have part 7 all written, but not yet translated into English.  Despite the seasonal busy-ness, I hope to have that completely done before the end of December.  Thank you for your patience. :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Ateyo Te Syaksyuk

Ma Alyara!  How cruel you are to make us wait so long for your story!
8)
:D
But I thoroughly enjoy your style and the perspective of a Na'vi woman is wonderful!
Ateyo te Syaksyuk
:-*

Alyara Arati

Irayo nìtxan nang! :D  And think of it as "suspenseful" instead of cruel. ;)  Or what it actually is, which is forgetful and easily distracted. :-[  Also, I very much appreciate the feedback! :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Ateyo Te Syaksyuk

You are not cruel!  I am being melodramatic! 
But don't be so forgetful and distracted!
Your adoring public awaits!
You are a good story teller and I look forward to the next episode!
ta ATEYO
:D

Alyara Arati

Thank you, thank you, O my adoring public! :-*  I know that you wouldn't call me truly cruel.
It is I who am being melodramatic now, but, honestly, it is all about bringing joy to people. :D
Myself included; writing is fun! :)  Off to do some more of it now...
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Ateyo Te Syaksyuk

WE AWAIT YOUR STORY!
(meanwhile I have incorporated Liei'el into my story, nìteng!!!)
ta ATEYO
:D

Alyara Arati

Quote from: Alyara Arati on December 04, 2012, 03:51:18 PM
I have part 7 all written, AND NOW translated into English.  Despite the seasonal busy-ness, I DID have that completely done before the end of December.  Thank you for your patience. :)
Also, stay tuned: new year=new hapxìtsyìp! :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Alyara Arati

Up to part 9 now, although I was very sluggish for a time, there...  Anyway, it's going faster now. :)
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Alyara Arati

Does anyone think I should continue this? :(
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci

Blue Elf

Are you in doubts? But I understand it, forum is quiet now with very low activity, unfortunately (and I 'm wondering if it change in short time - honestly, I don't hope so).
I'd like to read new parts, if they come, but you must decide if one reader is enough :) Of course you can write just for your pleasure - I do that on my blog. Just two or three post per month to not loose language knowledge.
Oe lu skxawng skxakep. Slä oe nerume mi.
"Oe tasyätxaw ulte koren za'u oehu" (Limonádový Joe)


Alyara Arati

Irayo, ma oeyä 'eylan.  :D:-*:D

It means a great deal to me that you answered.
Learn how to see.  Realize that everything connects to everything else.
~ Leonardo da Vinci