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Started by archaic, November 30, 2013, 05:01:01 AM

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OK, so the first three parts are about William Candy along with a T800 development prototype. As a hybrid of different generations of prototype, you might call it a mule, and he carries a package from Britain to the US for someone else, so maybe mule is appropriate.
Now this is not just the adventures of a retired Chief Master Sergent Candy, that would be a bit dull, and not very Learn Na'vi.

So here's one about Jake .....
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Plot twist ahead, prepare for complications!
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Hiccup and Astrid do good cop/bad cop, well maybe violent Viking/nonviolent Viking.
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Jake's talking to himself, maybe it's the pressure.
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OK, so here's another, a little later than intended, a little shorter than intended too.

Read this scene, then take another look at the 'MACHINE' logo, either at the top of the fic' page, or here .....
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Another, again not so very long, enjoy!
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Now Astrid's talking to herself, must be contagious.
A slightly longer piece this time.
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Another piece, this one kinda follows on from the last piece.
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Section 13, George and the Dragon.
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Section 14, who'd be a prison guard?
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Mini mistake at the spoiler description: Sectiopn 14 ;)

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Fixed, I actually spotted it almost immediately, I planned to fix it immediately, but my connection went all wobbly.

It's been doing last few days, I wonder what's up.

Did you spot any of the deliberate errors in the corpus?
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I didn't obseved one yet. I must read it more than one times to "see" an error.

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Did you work out the Machine logo?
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I made it, but it's two pictures.
See, on the one hand it's just a metal plate with the word 'MACHINE' written on it, but on the other hand it has screws missing.
That, and after section section 8 I said .....


Quote from: archaic on December 29, 2013, 06:13:24 PM

Read this scene, then take another look at the 'MACHINE' logo, either at the top of the fic' page, or here .....

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And then there was another, section 16 now up.
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