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Re: Machine comments.
« Reply #40 on: August 23, 2014, 05:28:05 am »
Section 40 now up.
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Re: Machine comments.
« Reply #41 on: August 30, 2014, 04:08:39 pm »
Section 41 ..... now up.
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Re: Machine comments.
« Reply #42 on: September 06, 2014, 07:52:03 am »
42, Douglas Adams say's this is answer to life the universe and everything, Archaic say's it's the latest installment of Machine.
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Re: Machine comments.
« Reply #43 on: September 13, 2014, 04:20:52 am »
Section 43 now uploaded.
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Re: Machine comments.
« Reply #44 on: September 20, 2014, 01:54:53 am »
Section 44 now up. The last line just felt so right.  ;) :D
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Re: Machine comments.
« Reply #45 on: September 27, 2014, 05:52:51 am »
Last piece, section 45, now up.
That's all folks!
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Re: Machine comments.
« Reply #46 on: September 27, 2014, 06:34:17 am »
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"How about 'Matt Smukahn'?" suggested the machine.
Matt Smukahn, Ma tsmukan.
Nice name!
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"Toutaire, LePhen and Gapp ." said the machine "Tute lefngap."
Good job for including Na'vi words like this.
Nice story.
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Re: Machine comments.
« Reply #47 on: September 27, 2014, 03:47:05 pm »
Nice to finally get a comment.  :) :D

I'm glad you liked it, I didn't translate cyborg into Tute lefngap, it comes from here .....
« Last Edit: September 27, 2014, 04:02:15 pm by archaic »
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