Missing the Stars: Flash-fiction

[Rain]

So I was reading about light-pollution and I had an idea. Here it is:

http://shirisaya.deviantart.com/#/d2wv69g

Comments? Questions? Insights? It's all open to interpretation. Any comments or corrections regarding my Na'vi will be more than welcome.

[Swoka Ikran]

A good read. People really do need to pay more attention to nature. Most of things we do today only distance us from nature more , whether intentional or not.

After reading this, I actually went and looked out the window at the stars. (No street lights in my neighborhood!)

[archaic]

A good read. People really do need to pay more attention to nature. Most of things we do today only distance us from nature more , whether intentional or not.

There's enough lights in my 'hood to make all but the brighter ones invisible, need to get away from the houses and stuff. There was so much less light pollution when I was a kid.

[Amaya]

I love the stars!  They keep me company every morning delivering my newspapers!  Very cute little short, perhaps you ought to do other pieces about this character.

[Puvomun]

This, short as it is, is beautiful. Very beautiful. Very good too, to pay attention to something like that.

Irayo, ma tsmuke.

[archaic]

I should have said I liked it before, so I'll make up for that now .....

I'm liking this, will there be more?

[Rain]

I should have said I liked it before, so I'll make up for that now .....

I'm liking this, will there be more?

Watch me on DeviantArt and we shall see! But yes, I have plans for more short-short stores like this one. I'm glad so many people liked it!

[archaic]

I'm not a deviant.

[Rain]

I'm open to ideas for further short-short stories. They'll probably be only a page or two in length and most will deal with a young Na'vi girl living as an exchange student with her house-mother, Miss Nichole. The stories will most likely be about Tamari's observations on humans, technology, man's divorce from nature and man's mistreatment of Earth including waste, pollution and war.

ta Rain

[Rain]

I have another one!

http://shirisaya.deviantart.com/art/Give-And-Take-176786705

[Puvomun]

I have another one!

And I like it!